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March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Shiv, it was a fun story! I loved it.
No, the library scene wasn\'t too gratuitious. Some moans and a pleading of Faster, Faster is nothing graphic. Thanks for leaving it up to our vivid imaginations.
It would be cto hto have a few chapters for Ginny. So does that mean Gin\'s a puzzle piece too? How about a big hunk of \"Wood\" for her? Or did you kill him off in the final battle? Just an idea.
Cheers Shiv!!!
No, the library scene wasn\'t too gratuitious. Some moans and a pleading of Faster, Faster is nothing graphic. Thanks for leaving it up to our vivid imaginations.
It would be cto hto have a few chapters for Ginny. So does that mean Gin\'s a puzzle piece too? How about a big hunk of \"Wood\" for her? Or did you kill him off in the final battle? Just an idea.
Cheers Shiv!!!
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March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic story. As always. Can\'t even bug you for updates as this one is done. I loved the drunk Hermione hexing the Aurors/strippers! I have seen bachelorettes that thought damned near anything with a penis was a stripper by the end of the night! Well done. Their wedding vows were sweet. Wish some of the weddings I have been to did those vows. Again, Thank you for a great story. :-)
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March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
thank you for the latest chapter! i have been waiting anxiously and patiently. ok, not so patiently. i want to play naughty professor! ooooo! what a line! oh! that could be a great title for a fanfic. i have no problem with filch being a griffindor. i just want to know about minerva and filch and how their date went. i know i\'m a shameless smut monger...(hangs head in shame). but i\'m an avid, eager smut monger! doesn\'t that count for something?
so how does one play naughty professor? aloha, mele
so how does one play naughty professor? aloha, mele
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March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, but it the epilogue and we don\'t know where they went on their honeymoon. Are we getting more?
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March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aw. I do love a wedding. Great fic Shiv!
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March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
\"Don\'t stun them, Filch!\" shouted Umbridge angrily, for all the world as though it had been his suggestion.
\"Right you are, Headmistress!\" wheezed Filch, who was a Squib and could no more have Stunned the fireworks than swallowed them. - from OotP, page 633, chapter 28 \"Snape\'s Worst Memory\"
As for my comment about being a prick, I meant he, like Snape(who had good reason not to like Gryffindors) is a prick to all houses except Slytherin. Therefore not likely to be in Gryffindor weren\'t he a Squib.
Just so you know, when I originally posted my comment to you it cut off the end of my message. What was at the end went a little like this: besides these minor overlooked details I think your story is great and can\'t wait to read more.
I only realized the end was cut off today, my apies.ies.
\"Right you are, Headmistress!\" wheezed Filch, who was a Squib and could no more have Stunned the fireworks than swallowed them. - from OotP, page 633, chapter 28 \"Snape\'s Worst Memory\"
As for my comment about being a prick, I meant he, like Snape(who had good reason not to like Gryffindors) is a prick to all houses except Slytherin. Therefore not likely to be in Gryffindor weren\'t he a Squib.
Just so you know, when I originally posted my comment to you it cut off the end of my message. What was at the end went a little like this: besides these minor overlooked details I think your story is great and can\'t wait to read more.
I only realized the end was cut off today, my apies.ies.
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March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter.
Can\'t for the life of me see that being a Squib is necessarily a discrete situation - for example, Neville, and indeed to some extent Hagrid.
Can\'t for the life of me see that being a Squib is necessarily a discrete situation - for example, Neville, and indeed to some extent Hagrid.
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March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
For something that your lj implied you\'d grown a bit tired of, the epilogue comes off very well. I\'m prejudiced, of course, because I tend to dislike weddings for being soppy, and this manages to be wedding without soppiness.... The vows are especially apt, and the bouquet scene neatly ties off the \"other\" romantic arc.
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March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Shiv, I beg you, please write Minerva and Filch\'s wedding... I cannot wait to see how Severus would repay all of Minerva\'s kindness.. :)
This was a great story.
Jeanette
This was a great story.
Jeanette
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March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 20... THANK YOU for sharing this story with us!!! I have very much enjoyed every bit of it & am sorry to see it end!!! Maybe somewhere along the line you could grace us with a sequel*