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for Arithmantic Dating Agency

by Shiv5468

person deblovesdragon
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fun fic, if I haven\'t already stated that... love McGonnagall the dating coach. Her relationship with Severus is wonderful.

The 3rd date is next!!! Dinner should be interesting.

Cheers!
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 12... Please believe me when I say that I LOVE this entire story, BUT I think this has to be my favorite chapter so far!!! The conversation between Severus & Minerva was not only FABULOUS, but it was ENTERTAINING as well!!! There were so many funny parts, but I think I like this one the best:

person Stellar Snape
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*gigglegiggle* For some reason the ending made me giddy and giggly. All...girly... way,way, I absolutely loved it! Can\'t wait for another date. *pulls out pen and paper* So how exactly is that lust potion made? :o)
person Rosmerta
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I finally caught up with this fic! It\'s even better than I remembered the first few chapters being. What fun! Now I can\'t wait to see who Ginny gets ... and how long it takes for Filch and Minerva to click! :)
person Rilla
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was such a sweet date. Although, I can\'t help but fear that there is an imminent explosion somewhere in the near future. Minerva and Filch doesn\'t squick me. My brain tells me it should...but it just doesn\'t. And that is so very wrong.
person Ann
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is going well --not too fast, not too slow
Longer version emailed to WIKTT
person kate
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
\"And of course he was in favour of equal rights for witches too.\"

Glorious, even if that is too close to too many prevailing attitudes in my immediate vicinity.

Love the continued light tone with promises of smut on the horizon. You do this so well it\'s almost embarrassing to keep telling you how great you are but at the risk that you like hearing it -- You do this so freakin\' well it scares mortal man!!!
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 11... What a WONDERFUL 2nd date, can\'t wait for their third!!! Considering how nervous they both were, I really like how comfortable they are with each other!!! Very much looking forward to chapter 12 & seeing what Minerva & Sprout have to say!!! Til then, Deb >^..^<
person gthistle
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t squee, generally, but squeeeeee. Brightened my day, that did. The balance between nerves and feeling comfortable with the other person seems exactly right. Best line: \"he was prepared to sacrifice the sole right to choose wine if it brought with it a loosening of morals and the prospect of pre-marital sex\" and its afterthought.
person Jenny
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t think that that \"flashback\" technique was at all awkward, don\'t worry. On the contrary, I think it was well handled - and definitely ups the tension for us, to match theirs. Well done - however aggravated I may feel! ;)

Ginny called in Neville? Ooh, can we have Ginny/Neville lemons? I like Ginny/Neville lemons ... Neville is seriously undervalued ...