rate_review Reviews

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?

i like it. now if you will excuse me, i must go eat some bread thingies

You\'re a Radio 4 listener! Don\'t you just love Just a Minute? Reading all of your fics at the mo, but just had to comment on that particular piece of English-ness (ooh, and i liked the chip butty bit in one of your others as well...)

Thanks for the great reading!

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That was super! I think it was improved by the added bits; however it was still very nice before :)

I definitely like the new version better, it flows easier and the delayed sex improves the story as well. Nicely done!

This was absolutely fantastic! I didn\'t read the version before it was edited, but I can say that this version couldn\'t be any better than it is now. You put dialogue where it needed to be and descriptions where they needed to be. For my tastes, there was nothing redundant or overdescribed. The dialogue was brilliant!! That\'s the only wording I came ume up with to accurately describe how I felt while reading it. Please keep writing as I can\'t wait to see what you come up with next. I have a couple plot bunnies hopping around in my head and only wish I had your talent so I could put them into a story worth reading. I guess I\'ll just have to keep reading everyone else\'s excellent work. Keep up the good work.

is it just me or did this story have like 20 chapters before...i am really confused...if you want to be a nice auther email me and tell if i am just stupid or if there was 20 chatpers...

I reread in a pleasant blur, which is a good thing because it means nothing stuck out obtusely. The library bit doesn\'t seem gratuitous to me (where else, if Minerva and Argus are to have sex before the wedding bouquet, could Severus come across their noise?), and I liked the sofa / armchair maneuvering in Ch. 5. Perhaps the best rounding-out change is the partisanship of Slytherin and Gryffindor students, which is sweet without being twee. :)

Well, India has banned all US Yahoo groups so I cant get on WIKTT or any other HP group now, but I have no trouble tracking updates to your stories.

Suprised to see such a big enhancement to a story, but I have downloaded and look forward to re-reading it. I already caught glimpse of an enhancement that was quite funny (Snapes reaction to Minerva-Filch, which is a novel pairing and a red rose to you for doing it)

Looking forward to you attentions on A Snape is for life...it\'s one of my faves.

i liked the changes! i went back and read from chapter 5 til the epilogue and thought it made more sense about minerva and filch and the tiles and jigsaw pieces. now i wish you would continue more on \"biter bit\"! aloha, mele