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March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really like the second chapter. Especially the moment Severus checks if his wand is in his pocket. It sounds so irrational, difficult to know if he thinks about defending himself or if it\'s a more inconscious thing (at least that\'s howaw iaw it).
I thought \"bonhomie\" was one word, but I might be wrong since I think I saw it spelled in two words before.
I\'m French, that\'s probably why I struck me. No offence, just my two cents.
I thought \"bonhomie\" was one word, but I might be wrong since I think I saw it spelled in two words before.
I\'m French, that\'s probably why I struck me. No offence, just my two cents.
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March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
::giggle-snort::
::wipes away tears::
This has to be the most original fic I\'ve ever read...How in Hades did you come up with this??!! ::starts snorting again:: Bloody priceless...
::starts laughiysteysterically:: Oh, I\'m done now...Just...I can\'t wait for more...AHAHAHAHA...::falls off chair::
::wipes away tears::
This has to be the most original fic I\'ve ever read...How in Hades did you come up with this??!! ::starts snorting again:: Bloody priceless...
::starts laughiysteysterically:: Oh, I\'m done now...Just...I can\'t wait for more...AHAHAHAHA...::falls off chair::
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March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The third chapter is so GOOD (I cannot find a better word). It reminded me of \"Kill Bill\", but it\'s even more wired and funny than Tarantino.
The all point about Poppy is hilarious. Thank you, looking forward to more.
The all point about Poppy is hilarious. Thank you, looking forward to more.
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March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I was sooo lucky I had finished my drink before I read your email at Yahoo and came over to read the new chapter.
This is hilarious! Very well written. Thanks for the laugh.
This is hilarious! Very well written. Thanks for the laugh.
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March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That...is PURE GENIUS!!! His cock is talking to him...I LOVE it!!! LOL you so need to update ;)
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March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, you\'ve done it now. You\'ve gone and made me want to review. I\'ll have you know I haven\'t reviewed anybin nin nearly a year (too much flamage headed my way for Con Crit. Sadly, looking back on it, they were all teenybopper fangirls.)
I\'m a sucker for archaeology, ancient dieties, and talking phalluses. You\'ve rolled all three into one and I am really, really looking forward to this rollercoaster. Nothing like a talking penis with a sense of humour. Especially since it\'s attached to someone in dire need of a humour transt. t. They may end up actually thanking those rotten Wey tey twins in the end.
Actually, I was able to follow the switch in \"tenses\" from the first chapter to the second, and I had been on my toes waiting to see how Min was going to manifest himself. Absofuckinglutely perfect. Thankfully, only Severus can hear him (so far). Is going to be absolutely hysterical if others around him start to hear Min as well. \"Oh, don\'t mind him, that\'s just my cock talking.\" NO, I don\'t think Severus would ever admit to it.
This story is going to be saved to Hard drive and printed and bound into book form when it\'s finished. I will force my husband to read it (he\'ll only read finished fics anyways). I will sculpt a nice Ithyphallic Min for myself and set Him in the bookcase on my headboard. Actually, I could probably get started on that sculpture now... Just need more clay...
Everybody! Come read this story! It is worthy!
I\'m a sucker for archaeology, ancient dieties, and talking phalluses. You\'ve rolled all three into one and I am really, really looking forward to this rollercoaster. Nothing like a talking penis with a sense of humour. Especially since it\'s attached to someone in dire need of a humour transt. t. They may end up actually thanking those rotten Wey tey twins in the end.
Actually, I was able to follow the switch in \"tenses\" from the first chapter to the second, and I had been on my toes waiting to see how Min was going to manifest himself. Absofuckinglutely perfect. Thankfully, only Severus can hear him (so far). Is going to be absolutely hysterical if others around him start to hear Min as well. \"Oh, don\'t mind him, that\'s just my cock talking.\" NO, I don\'t think Severus would ever admit to it.
This story is going to be saved to Hard drive and printed and bound into book form when it\'s finished. I will force my husband to read it (he\'ll only read finished fics anyways). I will sculpt a nice Ithyphallic Min for myself and set Him in the bookcase on my headboard. Actually, I could probably get started on that sculpture now... Just need more clay...
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March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
aha! now i get it (and it only took me three chapters). great plot! i love it! more, more, more! so what happens if it finally gets some sex? does it do a happy dance or maybe it sounds like someone talking with it\'s mouth full... no i guess that would be a woman\'s thing...aloha, mele
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March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Shiv, I truly want to encourage you to complete this story....no pressure, of course! I started laughing so hard when Severus was having his \"conversation\" that I did the unthinkable and tried to explain it to my non-HP loving husband! Keep up the wonderful work...my best to you and whoever is your beta, as you are both very talented individuals! Linda
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March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Shiv, I truly want to encourage you to complete this story....no pressure, of course! I started laughing so hard when Severus was having his \"conversation\" that I did the unthinkable and tried to explain it to my non-HP loving husband! Keep up the wonderful work...my best to you and whoever is your beta, as you are both very talented individuals! Linda
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March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG... I didn\'t know THAT had a personality! But then again, maybe that\'s why most men have the courtesy of a sick snake!!!