rate_review Reviews

Pretty good so far Potter. I\'ve got to hand it to you, the style and form of your writing has majorly improved from your first story to now. Your also doing a good job on finding interesting themes to base your stories on. Keep up the good work.

New chapters are good but I\'ve noted a few grammatical errors. I\'m really not the person to be talking about errors since I send even my homework assignments to a friend to check, but in my experience if you read your chapters aloud once or twice before you post them you will catch most of the errors. Whew that was a long sentance and totally messed up lol. I still suggest reading them aloud though dear.

You have the best ideas for your stories. It\'s very impressive. Your writing could use some work though. I\'d love to edit for you, if you\'d like the help feel free to email me. I can get chapters back to you quickly.