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October 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Just read chapters 21-23.... What\'s going to happen with Luna? Are Moody & Tonks going to end up with child? Where did Remus go & will he be back? Waiting to see what chapter 24 brins*
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October 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I always try to find something positive to abo about a fiction but it is very hard in this case. Your grammar and spelling are truly appalling. Its prophecy not prophacy; discover traderers in their midst - so they are going to discover people who buy and sell goods amongst them, I can see how frightening that would be. And Snape decides to buy his unborn \'child\' a pony, when they are having a boy and a girl - that should be children. And what on earth is he buying foetuses a pony for anyway - it would be years before they could ride it!
You seem to have a beta which makes this even more annoying. If you aren\'t prepared to take the time and effort to work on your stories, what are you writing for?
You seem to have a beta which makes this even more annoying. If you aren\'t prepared to take the time and effort to work on your stories, what are you writing for?
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October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very very very cool story! I like the way that Lucius is a different person... keep up the good work and ill be cjecking back frequently for updates!!
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October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
So much going on in poor Hermione\'s life, both good & bad. So much to deal with for someone do young. I will be watching for your next update*
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October 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is a great fic. i cant wait to read the next chapter. keep up the good work.
its well written and has kept me waiting for the future chapters. its really good.
thank you
Dark Emerald
its well written and has kept me waiting for the future chapters. its really good.
thank you
Dark Emerald
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October 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just finished chapters 16 & 17 & am still very much enjoying this story!!! I\'m glad to hear that Hermione will be having twins & that Luc& Iv& Ivy will have a daughter (maybe that baby will finaly get Lucius 100% sraightened out & wrapped around her tiny finger). Will be watching for your next update*
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October 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You need another beta reader. Not only is the grammar and spelling generating, but the plot has gone downhill as well. The heir of Ravenclaw idea is pathetic and cliched. Think first, darling
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October 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see that Lucius did the right thing for a change. Looking forward to chapter 16*
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October 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey!
Did you get my email with the edits to about 4 or 5 chapters? I sent it about a week ago. Let me know if you didn\'t, and I\'ll re-edit them. Do you want me to continue editing for you?
Did you get my email with the edits to about 4 or 5 chapters? I sent it about a week ago. Let me know if you didn\'t, and I\'ll re-edit them. Do you want me to continue editing for you?
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October 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Things are really getting going & am hoping that Malfoy, for once in his life, will do the right thing!!! Til your next update, Deb >^..^<