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person Michelle
schedule November 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. What appt. is Hermione going to this time? Same thing?

Also, in the beginning of the chapter you say Mrs. Weasley has been far more affectionate since Ginny died. But later, when Ron and Harry are tickling Draco... you have Ginny shouting, \"Dinner!\" to get the boys back into the house. Am I missing something??


Looking forward to more!
person Trix
schedule November 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Kirsteen,

I have just read your last chapter of \'Triumph out of the Bitter Taste of Ashes\', and noticed you had Ginny call Harry, Ron and Draco in for dinner. I\'m positive it had been said even in that chapter that she is dead. Did you mean Mrs Weasley? I thought I had better point that out to you, as it made me double back, wondering if I had missed something.

rwisrwise, I wanted to let you know that I have been really enjoying your story. I especially like the way Ron and Draco\'s relatonship is proceeding. I must admit I had never considered a Ron/Draco pairing before, simply becuase their hatred of each other goes deeper than school-boy rivalries, like Harry\'s and Draco\'s, but I am surprised to see it fit so well.

Hope to read more soon,

Trix.
person Rilla
schedule November 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I really like it that she is taking Snape with her as he\'s the only one who didn\'t lie to her or omit information from her. The stuff with the boys was very good as well!
person missingthecat
schedule November 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Confusion!!!
if Ginny died, how could she interrupt the byplay?
the cat
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule November 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Things seem to be going very well for Draco, Ron & Harry, they all needed a break!!! It also sounds like Severus is starting to come around a bit*
person kate
schedule November 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I do so like this story. One oddity: imagine my surprise in Chap. 24 when Ginny calls the boys in for supper ... er, isn\'t Ginny dead? Please do carry on. I\'m interested that Snape is going to be the support for Hermione at her appointment and can\'t wait to see if Hermione goes through with it and how both of them will handle the emotional fallout something like that must bring.
person Stella
schedule November 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hey! great story so far. (and i\'m one of the ones that liked the last ch. as it was originally) i\'m enjoying it. just one thing though. if ginny is dead, how can she call them in for dinner? is that a mistake or is she back some how? keep up the good work!
person Estrilda
schedule November 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I did think the story was good the way it was written before, but I believe that you have made it even better. It is a tough subject that you are handling and it is going very well. I just hope your Hr is even more traumatized before the ordeal is over. Anyway, I was confused by the comment between Draco, Ron, and Harry about Mrs. W being touchy \"since Ginny died.\" Then in the same chapter, Ginny calls them to dinner. Have a forgotten when Ginny died and was resurrected or something?
person katrine
schedule November 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
love the story--just a little continuity error bugging me--if Ginny was killed, how is she calling them to di in in chapter 24?
person Tanit
schedule November 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
In chapter twenty four (?) you say that Ginny W. calls the \'boy\'s\' into dinner. I thought you would want to know since Gins des dead and you probaly ment Molly or someone else. Other than that it was rather good.