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person Magdelena
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh!! This just gets so better and better. I\'m so glad to have you back writing more frequently. Draco and Ron\'s relationship has been perfect. I also love what you\'ve done with Hermione. She feels exactly right. So used to being in control and then having it ripped from her like this with no solution anywhere in a book. Excellent.

Keep it up.
Maggie
person crudedly
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
well, seems i\'m a bit dumb at times, but i *really* don\'t know what\'s Hermione going to do. Anyway, this chapter was so cuuuuuuute!
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 27... I really like this unexpected link between Harry & Draco!!! I can see where it would give them each a new found bit of respect for the other, because of sharing honesty as well as showing the other a fear that they have!!! I can see them becoming more civil to each other & maybe even going beyond that eventually, but the mutual respect is a good base for what happens later!!!

I am looking forward to more of Ron & Draco working out what they want from each other!!! I think that Ron may well be the best thing in the world to ground one Draco Malfoy!!! I also like the fact that Harry is so protective of him, another point of honesty he shared with Draco!!!

Another thing I am looking forward to is seeing what happens about Harry hearing Ginny... will they all be able to hear her or is her voice for Harry\'s ears only? This sounds like it will lend to some very interesting happenings in future chapters!!!

As always, your next update will be eagerly awaited!!! Till chapter 28, Deb >^..^<
person Merrideth
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am really interested in where this is going. Is Ginny still around somewhere? Is Harry going to have to team up with Draco to find her? What\'s going to happen to Hermione and how does Snape play into her part of the story?

Merrideth
person beth
schedule January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You have got to end this story right or you will ruin pleaplease give us a happy ending P L E A S E!!!!!!! if hermione can not absolutely the the baby then she should at least give the baby to draco!! after all it is his brother or sister. but end the story right because so far it is a great story.
person crudedly
schedule January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this was strange... it started out depressingly and at the end i had to laugh.. :) well, anyway, it was good.
person Rilla
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant chapter! Hermione\'s range of emotion is believable and touching. It makes perfect sense, after everything, that she would picture Snape as her fantasy hero; as much as that probably freaks her out. I love the way you ended the chapter, with Draco on the spot in front of Harry.
person deblovesdragon
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Is Harry going to ask Draco what his intentions toward Ron are? How cute! I am sure that Draco would juOVE OVE that.

So Hermione is fantasizing that S. Snape is her hero protector now. When will he start feeling that that is his role? Do they understand each other now? Please more interaction between the two of them.

Love the fic.
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 26... You really made Hermione\'s thoughts of Suicide very believeable!!! With her feelings battling inside, her thoughts were understandable!!! I am very happy that she saw Severus as her rescuer, I don\'t think anyone else would have given her the affect needed to prevent it!!!

The research sounds very interesting, but also like a HUhorehore!!!

I am looking forward to finding out what Draco says to Harry!!! I am thinking that we may see a bit more of the burrow situation soon, as well as more of Ron & Draco working out their relationship!!!

Til chapter 27, Deb >^..^<
person GoddessByline
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for yet another excellent chapter.

The part about Hermione\'s suicidal thoughts are heart-breaking, and I can so identify with dreaming about some hero comming to the rescue.
But like we say over in Sweden... What\'s the meaning with comitting suicide if you\'re not around the hear the talk afterwards.

Oh, and I want MORE snarky Snape!!!

(((hugs)))
Bibi