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Please please do not abandon this fic! It is so well written and I\'ve been waiting for an update for ages. Thoughought that I might be waiting in vain is too much torment to bear so please, please update!

Wow, this is just getting better and better!

I keep wondering who it has been that was behind Hermione when she went to the library in London ... maybe someone we have not yet seen in this story? Someone who has \"disappeared\"? But how would she know?

Oh, and I am looking forward to getting more information about that \"Ginny-as-a-ghost\"-thing ...

And, just to point it out: At some point you wrote that there were no Blacks left, but according to fam family tree in Grimmauld Place, Draco and of couse Narcissa would be the last of that \"Noble and Most Ancient House\", wouldn\'t they?

And I wonder what Hermoine will tell her parents next; after all, they know she is pregnant. They must be concerned about her physical and psychological health and surely would want to know if she terminated the pregnancy (but Snape told them as well as Hermione that it was too late for that) or planned to give the child up for adoption. At least, I would expect some letters from them.

And then there\'s Ron and Draco ... and Harry ... and Bill\'s \"surprise\" for his parents ... and ... and ... and ... so, just stop reading this insane review and go on writing more of the actual story! ;)

\"he was in deeper than he thought possible...\" ack! i\'m clueless! why would he think that? is he going to offer to marry her? or is he going to ask draco to marry her? or at least provide for the baby? help, help! how do you keep an idiot in suspense? don\'t update! please hurry and take pitty on me! aloha, mele

I am kind of disappointed that there will not be a Snape, Hermione and baby makes 3 ending........I had hoped for it......But why am i starting to think that that is what is going to ha, bu, but it will not be Hermione and Snape??? Could you possibly be thinking of a Draco, Ron and Hermiones\' baby makes 3 ending? oh god no.....please say it isn\'t so........oh well I\'ll keep reading and hoping that you change your mind.

The story is good.....tragic and way angsty, but up to your normal perfection........

It just makes me want to grab my stuffed Hermione doll and tell her what to do....LOL

you know i don\'t think i like how slow severus is in this fic. really shouldn\'t he have realixed several chapters ago that he was in deep emotional water with hermione. she has been so attached to his mere presence that i cannot imagine it being otherwise. then again maybe this is part of his reverting to typical male from previous male spy role. hmm?

I\'m so glad you\'re updating this story!!! You\'ve developed a unique slant on the plot and I for one love it!!!! Can\'t wait for the next chapter as things appear to be getting interesting to say the least. I\'m assuming they will talk at some future point, right? That plot twist dess des development as it would offer a different spin on the bitter Snape and his hatred for James Potter. Great emotional challenge/link for Hermione to be forced to view the baby to Harry. Great work

toooooo short! I wanna know what kind of family they are going to put the baby in!

This is a great story. I have been following it from the begining. I was so afraid that after the dark begining you would throw Severus and Hermione together in a fast, happy pink flowers type of love relationship. I am so glad that there is a slow buildup of mutual respect and perhaps later, love. Can\'t wait to see what happens next with Ron/Drace and Sev/Hermione. This is really one of my favorite fics!

Chapter 30... I think I see the beginnings of some strong feeling changes happening in one Severus Snape!!! I can only imagine what will happen if he decides that he likes being in deep & doesn\'t want out;-) With all of the corcumstances surounding this situation I think they are probably the best thing that could happen to each other!!! She needs to be treated normally & he needs someone to care for!!!

Til chapter 31, Deb >^..^<
P.S., This is your story & I will follow it to whatever end you take it to because I have respect for you as a writer, not to mention that this is an AMAZING story!!!

Thank You for the note & the hint!!! I think that I just see Hermione as being such a strong character that she would be able to face even a child conceived under these circumstances!!! Here again, this is YOUR STORY & all I really want is to see where YOU take it!!! I really don\'t expect or want a fairy tale ending, I don\'t think that would fit the rest of the story!!! I just one that is right for the innocent child involved here*

Okay Kiristeen, now we are getting somewhere. I don\'t know why, but whenever writers have chapters expressing Severus\'s feeling, I start to believe the possibility of sex, romance, relationships, whatever. It is his perspective that needs to be fleshed out to make it believable. Do you know what I mean? He is the harder nut to crack, so to speak.
Anyway, (after all the blathering) thanks for the chapter. Really liked it and I hope you write more soon.
bye.