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person shemhamforash
schedule October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well, he certainly wasn\'t happy about much in that chpater at all now was he?? How much gulit can one person bare upon their shoulders until it finally breaks them? Why is it that Sev always feels a though he is a sacrificial lamb when it comes to thinking or diplaying emotions that would let others see him as indeed human? Is his God complex a self induced torture or something that we as authors thrust upon him to cause him angst? ...So many ways to toture him, so much pleasure in doing so...we are truly evil beings...

Not much of that made sense to me either...

Wanting more, but you knew that already...

Shem xxx
person WendyNat
schedule October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this is really great work! I love the quote\"\"Because *both* of you are sneaky bastards, but at least yoe hoe honest about it.\" - so true, so true! Keep updating quickly - I\'m anxious to read about when they find her!
person Zephyr
schedule October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story is great! I can\'t wait for your next update.
schedule October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Gods Kirsteen... how many amazing fanfics can one person write?

Entralled.
person shemhamforash
schedule October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
So, you\'ve discovered something that the great-all-knowing Potions Master knows sweet fuck all about...Good for you! Ok, will admit my assumption about what Ron was going to say was completely off par...once again...Good for you!...Good on you for giving Harry the \"balls\" to confront Snape...and Good on you for giving Snape the patience to hear him out...

Good on you my dear (incase you hadn\'t caught onto the fact that I thought you have done a wonderful job)
person Rilla
schedule October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What a great use of Harry\'s dreams! I wonder how they\'ll find here. Will they be the ones to find her? Don\'t answer that...I\'m sure we\'ll find out. :)
person GeekGoddess
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this flood of stories about the need to mix muggle blood with pureblood in order to insure the continuation of the wizarding world....its like it happened all of a sudden this past week....and I am really enjoying reading the stories......I often wondered why muggle borns weredowndowngraded when the magic is more pure in them than in a pureblood since it begins with them.....well at least I think so.....anyway.....you are the writing one of the most powerful stories I have ever read.....please update soon.....well you just did, but anyway...keep it coming..... :)
person farfie
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wonderful two chapters. I always pictured snape as the type to practically memorize his students. and if you think about it, that\'s a perfect Slytherin trait, to observe those around you. helps to protect yourself or use to your advantage in the future. muwahahha! and i love the truce between draco and ron! ^.^
person Deb>^..^<
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
So much emotion in this chapter... poor Ron & Draco!!! Another chapter well written!!! Deb >^..^<
person Rilla
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sigh, I think I\'m getting a crush on this Draco. hehe. Nice chapter!