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person janine
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oooooohhhhhh

more more more!!!!

>=D
person uris
schedule April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I read from the beginning to Chapter 33 today and I hope that Draco gets to raise his brother or sister. ouldould take the burden from Hermione and give the boy a way to feel that he is giving something back to the world. It is a charming story and I feel so bad for Hermione. I known a few women that bore and raised a child of rape. I\'m glad I was never in that circumstance because I don\'t know if I would have their strength not to blame the child for his father\'s sin. You tied Hermione\'s hands by making it impossible for her to have an abortion. I know you are using the baby as a plot device. I\'m looking forward to see how it works out.
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 32... I am glad to see that Hermione will use the money for the babyT...T....

I am hoping that Draco will be the one that ends up wite che child!!! That will give him the opportunity to spend the money that would have gone into the trust on the child himself!!!

I am looking forward to seeing how their catching up goes as well as seeing how Hermione & Draco get along now that she is doing better!!!

Til chapter 33, Deb >^..^<
person crudedly
schedule April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yippiiiieee, an update! This was good, i\'m glad that Hermione is slowly able to find her way back again. And i think the solution to the pregnancy (sorry that it sounds so impersonal) is also very satisfying.
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my gosh! I just found this story, and I love it! I have to say that I don\'t usually like the Snape/Hermoine ship--I get a little squeemish at the age difference, being a mom of four kids myself. But when done well.... and you are doing it very, very well... I find it enjoyable. My only complaint is I wish the chapters were longer and more of them! Please keep up the great work and add me to your updates list!
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GLAD YOU\'RE BACK!!!

Chapter 31... Things seem to be going better between Harry & Draco, at least part of the time!!! I think Draco is finding that he & Harry have more in common than he would really like to admit!!!

I will be interested in seeing how Draco & Hermione interact now that Draco is aware that he WILL have a sibling!!! Looking forward to seeing more of these 3 as well as Severus & Hermione!!! Til chapter 32, Deb >^..^<
person deblovesdragon
schedule April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am glad that you updated. Please don\'t make us (okay... me) wait for so long.
What was Draco\'s dream all about? Ron is so sweet with him.
Cheers.
person kitsune-oni
schedule April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
First of all - this fic is amazing!
The flow is wonderful, I really couldn\'t stop reading (even reading it during class), and the pace is perfect. I like how you develop the relationship between Snape and Hermione, and I also like the new outlook on him - too many people are blinded by Harry\'s POV and Harry\'s just .... one person. I still haven\'t finished reading what\'s posted, but I hope there\'s some more hinting at SS/HG (or maybe some actiheehheehee...)
Draco and Ron\'s second kiss (on the train) was way too cute!! When I started reading the fic I was a bit eugh at the pairing but you\'ve written it quite well and it doesn\'t seem so strange. I can\'t believe anyone would bother you about it; I thought it was written quite well.
Also, your idea on genetics and the whole pureblood dilemma is really interesting and, if I think about it, could possibly be true. Well, I\'ve only done the basics in genetics myself but it all made sense....
I\'m glad Harry\'s off to a side, because I was a little tired of him. Oh, I love also how you characterize Draco, his concerns and doubts and feelings...
Okay, I might as well just say I love everything about this fic (which would be true). Actually, the only thing I don\'t like is knowing that the whole story isn\'t posted yet (a friend told me).
Back to reading~~~
person kitsune-oni
schedule April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ARGH! You can\'t just leave it there! That\'s plain evil, I tell ya.
Looking forward to tons more, especially more Snape/Hermy, though I have to admit I\'m liking Ron/Draco as well.
person Nymphadora Lupin
schedule March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I keep checking every single day. When will you post the next chapter??