rate_review Reviews

Ron/Draco is so unexpected, but it seems to work within the plot.

Poor \'Mione.

It is nicely written, though I have two little problems with it... First is that the plot goes almost mundanely slow after the first few chapters, then out of no where here is \'Mione. Where was the suspence of trying to find her, the searching and the fight to regain her memories. I really like how your waterfall of emotions is played with Malfoy never really feeling things like guilt and such. Very well done. My second problem is the most inportant....IT\'S NOT DONE YET....lol don\'t worry, I know good work takes time to make. I\'m a writer myself, a writer not a speller. There is a diff you know. ;D Well anyways, it\'s a really good story and I would really like to read the rest of it. Oh and for the record, This is the first story I have ever reveiwed so feel lucky, and my msn is out of date...-_-\"

Another fabulous chapter! I can\'t believe it\'s been 15 chapters already. I can\'t wait for more...

I like the way Draco was fighting internally not to think the word \"fainted\". And his reflections on the kiss.

You have really forced me to see Draco in a different light...I have never pictured him as he has been portrayed throughout your story...My fault for considering him in such 2-dimensional persepectives...thank you for opening my eyes on this issue...

Keep on...

Shemxxx

If I\'m reading this right, in chapter 14, does Hermione not know yet? Draco really has a lot to work out & Hermione will too. Will be watching for your next chapter*

Back again...I read over your authors note from that chapter and after posting my lateset review realised I mentioned Sev being over-protective...I hope you didn\'t see it as a sledge or attack on the characterisation you had chosen to give him...I would never do that mainly because I am a firm and vocal believer that all the accusations thrown at authors for making him OOC is a whole lot of smelly bullshit...All we know about him is what JK tells us, the rest as you have said, is up to personal interpretion...My whole reason for musing on the issue was to \"think\"out aloud (or rather write) that maybe there was something then Sen Sev\'s part that we haven\'t yet been exposed to...it was most certainly not a jab at you for having him OOC...I would never consider that as I have stated...

Hope this clears the issue up from my part...

Shemxxx

You know what the BEST feeling in the world is? (or well.. one of them ^-^) ... when you \'esh\esh\' a webpage... and all of a sudden it\'s been updated!!! =) That\'s what just happened with your story and I was ecstatic!! ooo.. that and the fact that Draco pointed out what I was speculating about in my last review... about their being another Malfoy heir... nice to know I wasn\'t becoming delusional or anything in my assumptions :) Great job with the story... and I really REALLY appreciate all your updates... gives me something to look forward to!!

I do have a question though... I\'m assuming that Ron knows Hermione is pregnant... since he was there when Wolffe (stupid chit) blurted it out... so why then is he still demaning to see Hermione at the infirmary? Perhaps he\'s just being an ignorant prat? :) I wouldn\'t put it past him...

Thanks for all the updates!!

~Leigh~

So, it seems Hermione finally has gotten her memory back. That was so funny, the part were she confesses to why she could tell everything was real! I wonder what happens when Rod Had Harry find out she pregnant? And when Draco wakes up, too, I wonder how he will handle the knowledge that Hermione is carrying his little brother/sister? Keep going, I cant wait for more!

Chapter 13 is GREAT!!! I really like how you had Hermione respond to Severus*

*Snort* THAT whole scene was precious...I wouldn\'t wish for your presence so I knew it must be real???....Am sure that statement will become one of the classics of SS\'HG fics...loved it...loved it...glad that Wolffe chit got what was comming to her as well...Is it just me or did Sev behave a little over-protective of Hermione after their little encounter??? Could be just making up what I want to see rather than what I did...loved it in any case...

wanting more

Shem xxx