rate_review Reviews

Good. Suspenseful, with a good plot. I\'m glad you don\'t let the diary be the all consuming part of this. But its presence is greatly intriguing. I wonder how he got it. Albus, perhaps?

I\'m not sure what I\'m getting the bigger laugh out of, your story of Sev and Hermione, or the one about Lucius and Hermione. They\'re both terrific!

This is an excellent story and I\'m so glad that I found it. I can\'t wait to see what happens next. i\'m particularly interested in finding out how Severus got the copy of her diary. Hmm. I\'m sure that will be an interesting twist.

Anyway, thank you so much for writing. I look forward to reading your updates.

Well first off i really like the story. *smiles* well in the second chapter i was wondering when he was going to read the diary. how did he get a copy? hmmm... It was funny that he did in the third. Naughty Severus reading other peoples thoughts. tsk,tsk.

Wonders how you are going to keep her there to be an apprentice.

well i hope that there will be another chapter soon. Now i remember why i dont write down everything in a journal.