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for The Diary

by Lizski

person Laerai
schedule October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hehe. Invade someones privacy, but you might not get desired answers! Ya gotta be careful. Her diary has some really funny comments but the overall story is more serious. I like the combinations.
person Persephone
schedule October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
How did Severus get a copy of the diary? Interested to see which one of them will confess first. Very entertaining but I do hope you haven\'t abandoned Lucius. ;)
person SandraM
schedule October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Finally, someone else who thinks that characters need to develop into a relationship. I was beginning to think I was the only one!
person Kiristeen
schedule October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Agreed, the two wouldn\'t just \'hop into bed together on the slightest whim\'.

I\'m definitely enjoying this well written story. : ) The interview was especially fun. I look forward to more.


Kiri
schedule October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is a really good start to a really good fic! I can\'t remember the last time I laughed so much while reading a fic! You are a really good author and I hope you add more soon!
Tanya~
person Daya
schedule October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'m really enjoying this, I love the idea that Snape is torn between his voyueristic instincts, and actually NOT reading the diary, oh please let Ole be a right randy goat who does nothing but attempt to hit on Mione so she goes running straight into the arms of our darling Severus...

*wipes drool from keyboard before accident can occur*

Hope this conts!
s!

Daya
person Helena
schedule October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm,very good,very good indeed!!!
Just loving it!!!
I think this is going to be veeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeery interesting!!!!
person GeekGoddess
schedule October 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hehehe...I love this.....you are such a good storyteller....I can\'t wait to see what happens next.
person J.P.
schedule October 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE what you\'ve written so far!!!!!!! Please write more soon!!!!!
person Anon
schedule October 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
So how did Sevvie get the diary? *I hate mysteries:P* He is going to endlessly tease her, isnt\'t he? Yay! Great so far! How did I ever miss this at Whispers?

Dumbledore as the matchmaker again. I love that. That is so believeable and it warms my heart! Thanks.

Heather