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for The Diary

by Lizski

person Poison
schedule October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Whooooa! Story\'s great...Dear Snape can\'t take his eyes off, can he? ;o)
Please write more!!!
person wintermoon
schedule October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is great! I love it, the tension you\'ve built through all the diary entries and interviews and everything else, it\'s fabulous! I can\ait ait to read more. If it\'s not too much trouble, would you email me when you update? I want to be sure I don\'t miss this one!
person Kiristeen
schedule October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OUCH! I\'m happy for Hermione, but I\'m feel so sad for Snape. :( ::sniff sniff:: Hope there\'s more soon.


Kiri
person Red Writing Hood
schedule October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ok...you had better do something...QUICK! Severus will go mad if she really leaves..UGH...MORE!

Red
person Karena Elizabeth
schedule October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Good grief I can\'it fit for an update! Excellent story line and fabulous character developement!

I hope you update soon - Great job!

Karena ELizabeth
person GeekGoddess
schedule October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow...that was an intense chapter.....I am a huge fan of Hermione and Snape.....and I want a happy ending....come on....let her say what the heck and give him a proper head blowing kiss when she leaveswartwarts......you write them so well....hey...i didn\'t realize you were the one that wrote Lucius Bookshelves...I love that story too....for once I don\'t have to copy paste a Hermione and Snape story into my wordprocessor and find and replace Snape with Lucius...... ;) kidding I don\'t really do that.......hehehe that often.
person Deb>^..^<
schedule October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Where is this going to go? Will she leave & then realize the error of her ways? Will Sev go to her before she has a chance to leave & give her something that her dream lover would? Please update soon!!! Deb >^..^<
person jenn
schedule October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i don\'t think i\'ve reviewed yet, but i\'ve been reading since this story was first posted. good lord, you\'re amazing at stringing us along. :) this last chapter was certainly a downer though. i certainly hope you make up for it with some smutty goodness later on. :)
person SilentSoul
schedule October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this story is very good. i thi kyou can make any couple look like adam and eve, really. please update this story and the other story soon. i enjobothboth of them very much and heavily anticipating the next chapter...puts sum REAL action into it baby!!
person Rilla
schedule October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Okay, you got me so hooked that I had to go over to Whispers to read the whole thing. Lovely job!