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October 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well done.....I am very please with how this one ended.....you are an exceptional storyteller.
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October 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Waah! I loved it! Very well written...I\'ll be checking out your other stories now...keep writing or I\'ll sick my rabid little brother on you!
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October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Open mouth-insert foot!!!!! Is there a surgeon in the house???????
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October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OH NO! Please don\'t tell me he\'s completely mucked things up... and Oi! what a cliffhanger!!!
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October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I have always had a story line similar to this one....*similar* with some key differences! Great minds think alike. hehe I have been enjoying your story so very much and I am very sorry that i did not find it sooner. Please continue to write. Please?
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October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Fun, fun, fun !!! May the Libido Tango begin !!!!
Always wanting more............. Glinda
Always wanting more............. Glinda
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October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I had so much I wanted to say about the last couple of chapters, lol, then Severus put his foot in his mouth and I caI can think of is \"OOOPS!\"
LOLOL Enjoying the story, and I look forward to your continuing it.
Kiri
LOLOL Enjoying the story, and I look forward to your continuing it.
Kiri
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October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve just read chapters 11-13, WOW!!! This is getting really good!!! Poor Severus & that slip of the tongue;-) I hope he is q wit witted enough to cover up that slip & not ruin the moment!!! Can\'t wait to see what happens next!!! Deb >^..^<
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October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AH! Why did he open his big mouth! That was the last thing he should have said. Men! Dying for more.^^
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October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
No! You can\'t stop there! Pleeaase post more- your\'e killing me!