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for The Diary

by Lizski

person Annie
schedule February 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm a romantic at heart too, and I love happy endings. Frankly there are not enough happy endings in life, so it is good to find them in stories.
schedule May 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I found it intriguing - but I would very much have liked to see more development of Severus' change in attitude. I do like how you make him have a harsh separation of his treatment of staff versus students.

Having Hermione study under another potions master was a very good tactic. I liked the fact, though, that you didn't dwell overly on her having romantic liaisons while she was away. It would have made for a much more angst-ridden story once she and Severus did reunite, which would have dramatically altered the tone you've achieved so well with this piece.

I do thank you for sharing this; it was an excellent read! Happy writing to you!
schedule May 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was wonderful.I do love a good hiss fic
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it's probably been a while since anyone has reviewed this but I love it! I wish you would update with some more chapters. Or was that the end? I'm not sure but I do love where this was going. Please let me know. Good luck with all your other ventures.
Blessed Be,
Sandra
person DB1
schedule August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@15. awesome story loved it!

*DB*
person Anon
schedule June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Chavela
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3

LOL! Snape... sexy Snape... and it was so hilarious to watch it all.

IF he drives her away... it is only his fault, and he only has himself to blame.


What a damn erotic dream.
person Chavela
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 9 (chapter 8)

Wow, that made my heart pound... kind of angsty... and I felt so much for Snape at the end of the chapter. It made my heart clench very painfully.
person Chavela
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


What a wonderful and perfect ending to this awesome story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Queen Celestia
schedule June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The whole cupid/dumbledore thing is kinda erm .. scary.