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Alright alioth dear I\'ve read it. I can see Harry acting this way for one reason alone, he was very much like that when he started at Hogwarts, however, the old school griffendorish concept is stiot sot sitting quite right this might merely have to do with personal preceptions. It seems sudden that he was able to work thr his his strands so quickly, I would think it would have taken a while, it is one thing to suddenly relieze that you must and another to accept this pieces of you so quickly. I will be interesting in seeing how the summer went if you cover that more. Going to Snape is both daring and slightly arrogant, which way I cae ite it working.

Oh the one major thing that bothered me is Dumbledore, we have seen him be kind, but this is far beyond the bounds we have witnesses, much too much the kindly old man and none of the power that is behind that. I think you have reduced him to be less than he is, he isn\'t a saint, and Harry\'s rational for forgiving him didn\'t sit right either, even if it was to protect him it was still a wrong that has gone uncompensated for, and it was uncalled for to begin with. The flip-flop of Dumbledore is going to bother me, I w thi think you should ensure you don\'t loose the part of Dumbledore that makes him so powerful, the kindness and the harsh wisdom, now you have only the kindness and none of the practical aspects, for him right now, for everything he has done to Harry to suddenly say never mind all I have done to you you are special enough now not to worry about Tom even thought I have dedicated your life to it.

Please do continue.

It\'s good. I love it. Now go make some more chapters

- Sly

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