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for Seeking the Star

by alioth

person Heather
schedule October 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow, i would just like to say that i am in love with your fic, i LOVE it, you r doing such a great job on it, keep writing really!
person Kiristeen
schedule October 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I have to say this is definitely a most thought provoking story. Thoroughly enjoyable, it is well written and well thought out. I definitely look forward to seeing it play out. And I have to agree with your comments in regards to Albus Dumble. I. I have long thought, though decidedly \'on the side of light\' he just as certainly not the kindly, jovial wizard he usually presents himself to be. IMHO, he is a very manipulative man, who would do just about anything he feels is necessary to achieve what *he* thinks is right, regardless of the cost to himself or others. That\'s not to say, I don\'t respect him, because I do. I just think that were I in his care, I wouldn\'t be leaving *my* best interests in his care. LOL

Anyhoo, hope to see more of this story.

Kiri
person Kentucky Soul
schedule October 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this story...and I love the way that you use the tarot cards to name the chapters...please email me when you update.
person lupusdragon
schedule October 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Karen: *siffle* That is sad. Harry may not pity himself, but I do feel bad him.him. I want him to be happy! *wailing*
LD: Give it some time, geeze. This is really great. The plot, the concept, you writing, all of it! *bounce bounce* Thank you so much for writing this!
person Tina
schedule October 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like it, like it a lot...can\'t wait to see what happens.
person SailorAurora
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hehehehe, I like this. not only is Harry happy again.. he gets to surpise and shock the potions master. I love a shocked, surpised snape. *smirks*
person I Got Tired of Waiting
schedule October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
:) Hi there...
I have no problems with Harry having found his strands so quickly--epiphanies are always fast and a little scary. I had not thought about it, but I agree you need more of an edge to Dumbledore although I think Snape is spot on. This is going interesting places and I am eagerly anticipating the next installment.
IGToW
person Ox King
schedule October 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hum.. What to say? I\'ve like thea ofa of Harry letting go of his anger and the way he did was original. I\'m use to reading Harry angery and usualy keeping his anger. I\'m looking forward to the next chapter and what Harry has to say to Snape. Also, this new power Mr. Potter has and what will come of it.
person SAK
schedule October 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying this story. It is intriguing and I look forward to seeing how the story develops, understanding the pull of power Harry has.
person Suni
schedule October 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
please keep writing!