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this is really really awesome! can\'t wait for more!

I love this fic, I\'ve been reading religiously since chapter 3 (reviewing chapter 10) and I have to say this is an excellent fic, keep up the great work and I am looking forward to more!!

~~Minnie

Hello dear,

That was an excellant chapter, but two things, One the protection potion that Dumbledore is taking I would think needs to be a bit explained why does he need it, how long has he been taking it ect. it is odd that Harry needs to help make something thing that we have never heard of that his bond with Dumbledore, which hasn\'t been explained will make more powerful. No don\'t you are plotting all of it but you gave us too little when you mentioned it here.

Ron is too much of an ass. You know I agree with you about how dear Ronnikins will ultimatly turn out but I think that was a bit extreme in this instance. He doesn\'t like Slytherins and he would be mad but seeing Harry exhausted he would listen, in almost all case before attacking even in the 4 book at the times when they were fighting the worst when Harry was in trouble Ron was there. Rons full git motivation is not yet clear. He can be a git, but have him actually fight with Harry before he starts acting that way.

The Sanos healing was fascinating by the way that was excellant, and the way you played Dumbledore was greyeahyeah something worked itself out alright. I love that it was a Slytherin and not a Gryfindor, never could hurt his own house could he?

Very powerful, very haunting chapter. The attempts to break Harry, both heartbreaking and horrific, without being overtly graphic. Well done. It\'s a rare author who can reach this levelhorrhorror without resorting to graphic descriptions. I salute you.


Kiri

Kare: Oh that was so sad. I mean, Ron is such a git!
LD: With that temper, it is no wonder so many people make him a bad guy in stories. I know I dKareKare: I do feel bad for the girl. To loose hearing... w it it is some small comfort that it is only in one ear. Poor Harry though, coming across that and having no idea what to do. *sniffle*
LD: This is really excellent. I can\'t wait to read more. ^_^

Ok, I can understand that, much as I dislike the pairing, but I understand. I still like your story though. I loved the Quidditch match, and Harry saving that girl, but Ron is deff. starting to bug me. How can he be so self-centered? If I was Hermione, I would have dumped his annoying ass. Cant wait to read more!

OMG!! its wonderfull I hope you continue!!!

I just found this fic and read all eight chapters. I love you... This is wonderful. And, sorry, I was too interested in the story to bother with grammatical errors or plot inconsistanciesl. Please put me on your mailing list so that I know when you have updated. And thanks for such an awesome story. Arwen

Wow, ok, first off, your story is wonderfully written, and I love how each chapter is based on one of the tarot cards. You have a brilliant mind, to be able to make all that up and be able to describe it to others in a way were they understand and can picture it in there minds. Dumbledore is starting to freak me out a little. Is is still sane? And if he is what are his intentions? I think the only thing you have given me to complain about is your choice of pairing. Now, dont get me wrong, if you love H/S pairings than ignore what I am about to say and keep on writing in that way, I will probably still read it anyways because it is still all in all a great story. But why H/S? Sorry, its just I am a total pai pairing lover and your pairing choice is the only thing ruining the story for me. I will be honest with you and tell you that the only reason I clicked to read your story was because you had an intriging summary and I just choose to ignore the pairing. However, once I started reading it I started to want the pairing to be different because the the story would be just that much better, in my opinion. Sorry if I am insulting you in any way, I dont mean too, Im just telling you what I like and dislike with this story. I cant tell you to change the pairing though, I know, so like I said before, just ignore this comment if you really love H/S pairings and continue with your story how you like, this is just a bunchmy rmy ramblings.
Cant wait to read more of it either way!

this is a great story and I can\'t wait for the next chapter.