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Very interesting chapter, I\'m really enjoying it.

Powerful...I\'m utterly speechless. It\'s a good thing I\'m typing this review then isn\'t it? I felt so compelled to comment immediately that chapters 10 and 11 moved me immensely, that I haven\'t even gone on yet with the rest of the story yet. On to the next chapters, then!

LD: *sigh* Well, I suppose we shall just have to wait. *Pout*
Karen: Lots of progress in that chapter, getting through a number of days in one go. *nod* Good good. I just love Sev and Harry.
LD: I don\'t like Ron. I think his is going o soo something he is going to regret...
Karen: Oh, pass my compliments to your beta. You guys make a great team. This story, in addition to being amazing, is well written. That makes me happy, I don\'t like reading stories with good plots but bad writing. So yeah, you get extra brownie points for being able to do both ^_^
LD: Or, you know, we could send real brownies, after all, we college gals need to stick together *wink*

Karen: Yay! That was so happy/sad and tender.
LD: You sound like you are five when you stay stuff like that.
Karen: Well, I liked it.... that is how I feel about it.
LD: I love that the characters are so IC. Sev is still a snarky bastard, his reaction to Hermione just proves that. It is great! That make the story that much more powerful. It is excellent.
Karen: Can\'t wait for the next chappie ^_^

This chapter was incredible. Harry\'s defense mechanism was unique and powerful. Hermione Snape Harry interaction touching and sad. Well done.

Kiri

Karen: *sniffle* That is so sweet.
LD: Are we reading the same story?
Karen: That was a wonderful ending. Harry is safe and cuddled with Sev and the are sharing a moment... plus they are partially bonded now. I bet they\'ll have to do it again, except with healing Sev. That would be great and then they would be all bonded ^_^
LD: *raised eyebrow* Are you sure we are reading the same story?
Karen: Oh, and Sev will want to kill Lucius and Bellatrix, I know I want to, unless Albus took care of them all already, though that just seems too easy, for Lucius to be dead already. We need some more trouble for our favourite couple.
LD: O.O Don\'t mind her... the story is going great, she is just getting a little excited. Can\'t wait for the next chapter ^_^

OH man, this is really good, but poor harry. I hope it gets better for him soon. Update soon.

I cannot come up with words strong enough to describe my feelings as I read this chapter. All I can do is sa was was incredibly powerful, and touched me deeply. The descriptions you gave for the \'deeper\' Sanos healing were marvelous. Well done!


kiri

Karen: Meanie. Now I am crying. *sniffle*
LD: Yikes, that was intense.
Karen: Please, they have to find him.

That was bloody fantastic! I like the way Harry\'s personality developed...the transition between anger and understanding was beautifully done. Of course, it /so/ helps that this is going to be Harry/Sev...my favourite pairing.
I like the Ron bashing too...he is probably the character I dislike the most out of the entire HP series...the way JKR potrays him, it is entirely possible that he\'ll get into a jealous hissy fit...
I suppose the relationship between Hermione and Harry was good too...he\'ll need an anchor...someone he could call family in the face of the troubles I\'m assuming will come. Dumbledore is entirely too manipulative, and Sev would be a lover, not exactly family in a platonic way...
Anyway, I /loved/ the fic, and I couldn\'t wait for more...so...update...FAST!

cheers,
chibi