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October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! what a great story! More! more! more!
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October 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. When can we expect an update?
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October 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Just read the first chapter, and it looks nicely written. I shall come back for the rest. :) If you allow me a piece of constructive criticism, though, original characters, particularly when they have the author\'s name, are rarely a good idea - Mary Sue alarms everywhere start ringing madly.