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Seems like they are learning more about the dream world & each other... even if it is in a round about way. I will be watching for your next update, Deb >^..^<

I really hope that you get a new beta OR, if you don\'t mind, you post more & edit later. I am just curious to see what happens next, curse me for being an impatient woman;-) Hoping for more SOON*

Another dream an it\'s begining to sound more & more like Damien is in fact Draco*

See, NOW I feel more at ease.

I love this story and love how not fluffy it is; it\'s killing me to find out what this dream world really is. How are Hermione and Draco meeting there randomly? Is it because both of their parents beat them unconscious at the same time or something? Does it have to do with that?

I don\'t know. It\'s killing me to find out though! Please continue posting. I like the character development and I really like that other guy; Hermione\'s best friend but I forgot his name. Anyway, post soon!

Have to say I think this story is written very well. It reads very smooth. I hope you update soon. :D

that was a bit confusing at first, but I eventually got it. Its still a bit shaky for me, but I guess thats the point and what you want. I feel like I\'m reading 100 different stories at once, but you\'ve got my attention, so continue.

Threatening your readers, are we? Tsk tsk tsk. If I wasn\'t so intrigued by this story, I\'d be appalled enough to stop reading. Just kidding. Now, you say you want some constructive criticism... how about \"update fa?\" ?\" Do you think that myself leaving 10 reviews, each with a different name and containing some sort of blatant threat on your life if you didn\'t update, would help you write faster? But seriously, I do like this story. The Hermione\'s-life-isn\'t-so-perfect thing is slightly cliche but it\'s certainly well-written... and as I said before, the dream was really intriguing and I\'m on the edge of my oh-so-comfortable-swivelly chair... what happens?

No, you cann\'t just leave it at that. And you sure as hell can\'t get us to review it by threate to to not continue. Oh, wait, you just did. Happy now? Now get back to work and finish this story.
On a more friendly note, good work! It\'s a different take than I\'m used to, I like Hermione\'s muggle experiences. But there\'s not enough magic. One little, itty bitty chappie don\'t count. In other words, more! (Ok, that was just one word, but you get the point.)
In terms of critiques, the dad\'s tirade was a wee bit trite, but ok. Mostly I like the writing style. I like what you did with the dream and I hope you do some more. I\'d like to see you get into their minds a little more, cuz what you started with is intriguing.
Now are you happy? :)

Nooooo! Must update! Very good so far and I can\'t wait for more.

I like this story so far. I\'m pretty sure that \'dream\' that Hermione had wasn\'t a dream, but I\'ll let you elaborate on that a little later on. I think that you WILL NOT get reviews by threatening people if they don\'t review. I know that I wouldn\'t review had I not read that, but I just want you to update faster. I know that to many people pressing the \'review\' button is a hassle and they won\'t. That doesn\'t mean you should deny the rest of the pleasure of reading your story.

Either way I enjoy your character development and Tony. I completely hate Hermione\'s dad and you did a job on making me hate him. It\'s part of his character. Although, I\'m guessing that the mother would be more prone to loving her mistake child and the FATHER would jet after learning that the mother fucked someone else and lied to him about his child.

I also think that Hermione\'s entirely too calm about her fucked up family.

I LOVE this story and I expect that you will update soon. See? You threaten and I get snooty. I EXPECT that you update soon...got it?

Love it. You rock. Will be waiting for more. Where\'s Draco? More Draco. Me want more honeys in the story. ;)