rate_review Reviews

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Hello...This must be torture...Please UpDate or say your done...Dose anyone know if something has happened to the writter???? I just want to know so I can stop obsessively checking to see if there\'s been an up-date. Please! Can you help me??? My e-mail address in darkguardian_aria@yahoo.com If it dosen\'t show up already...Help!!!!

Sniff...sniff...jan 13th and you haven\'t updated...don\'t you love us anymore??? Please update!!! I\'m dying to know what happens next...If you\'ve given up on us just say so...but don\'t keep us in suspence like this...it\'s heart renching!

I knew it!!!! It\'s Draco! It is Draco, isn\'t it? Well whatever, I like it so far.

Well as long as your going to get the plot really rolling after all that buildup I\'ll stop thinking that your just aimlessly writing. I\'ve got my suspicions on theams ams and I\'ll assume that you\'ll be bringing up the potions/arthimancy project mentioned in the first chapter soon?

I am patient with regards to the development of your story plot and ideas; and am glad to see that you\'ve put in some effort in your writing. I will follow this story because I am curious to see the D/Hr interaction developing. The Dreamscape idea is an interesting addition, as is the idea of Draco observing Hermione. Whilst I doubt that Hermione faces abuse from her father, I\'m willing to suspend my belief to see how this develops in your story. A suggestion for your writing - please use breaks, such as double spacing or markings such as *********** to change your scenes. I found that I had to double back to re-read some sentences when you had changed the scenes, especially when you used dialogues to end one scene and begin another one.

This is one of the must best fan fics I have ever read, I mean it atullay has a good plot. On behave of all readers THANK YOU and keep the chapters coming.

im not one for flaming, but i think this story is really confusing and has no plot line whatsoever! i mean, i have absolutely no idea whats happening.now dont be mad at me, but i really have no clue whats going on here!

Merry Christmas to you too. I\'m so happy you undated!!!THANK YOU!!! I liked this chapter, Fuzzy Slippers?!!! That was great!!!!

Chapter 11.... This is getting interesting, Draco seems to be keeping a pretty close eye on her!!! I also like the fact that Ron can\'t seem to find it in him to ask if she has a boyfriend, shy as he is!!!

Will she tell the boys what had really happen to her over the summer? Til chapter 12, Deb >^..^<