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person Chriswiz
schedule June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! I LOVE it! Dumbledore is in prison inside Hogwarts... This story is FABULOUS! Don\'t stop! I can\'t wait to see what happens next. I am also glad to see Molly get hers. Okay, I am a Slyth at heart so these false goody-goodies have REALLY irritated me. Glad the little girls are safe.mm..mm....I wonder if the twins will join Harry willingly and piss off Ron even more. Yeah, I don\'t think there is any \"redeption\" for Ron. Well, unless Millie shapes him up...(HA!)
Keep writing. You really have talent.
person Jamie
schedule May 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
DI loI love your story! :) I just reread practically the entire thing. ;) lol. Just as good the second time! Sigh. Your chapters are SO worth the wait, but at the same time I wish they came faster. ;) lol, aren\'t I a contrary thing? Seriously, FANTASTIC job, keep up the excellent work, and take the time you need to continue with this amazing story. Question: if this is Apprentices I, will there be sequels to this? =-O ooooh :) Now THERE\'s an exciting idea. ;) hahaha. Anyway, just wanted to tell you again how awesome I think your story is. :)
person Jamie
schedule May 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn I love your story! :) I just reread practically the entire thing. ;) lol. Just as good the second time! Sigh. Your chapters are SO worth the wait, but at the same time I wish they came faster. ;) lol, aren\'t I a contrary thing? Seriously, FANTASTIC job, keep up the excellent work, and take the time you need to continue with this amazing story. Question: if this is Apprentices I, will there be sequels to this? =-O ooooh :) Now THERE\'s an exciting idea. ;) hahaha. Anyway, just wanted to tell you again how awesome I think your story is. :)
person DBZVelena
schedule May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Still folowing this story. loving it to death!
Keep writing!
Once the story is done, i\'ll probably read it again too.
Its about as good as the real thing you know!
person Anon
schedule May 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YESSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!! :) Not that I\'m a Dumbledore-hater, but for the character you\'ve \"created\": YESSSS!!!! :-D This was SUCH an AMAZING chapter! :) I know I\'ve said it before, but I postively LOVE your story. I wait anxiously for each new chapter, though I will in no way rush you. Having had Tynan say in the last chapter that Dumbledore was needed at Hogwarts, it\'ll be interesting to see how/where you take things now that Harry has apparently agreed with everyone else\'s consensus on what to do with him. :) I like that Percy was actually an ok kinda guy in this one. :) Absolutely LOVE your work, and I can\'t wait until you get time to write the next chapter! :-D Patiently yours, -Jamie-
person mick
schedule May 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
what happend to philomena.
I also love the story.
person Genita
schedule May 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is just TOO good! Keep up the GREAT Work! I really look foreward to each new chapter of your captivating tale! About time Dumbledore was neutralized! About time that the Apprentices started rocking that meddling old foagey\'s world,too! Absolutely can\'t wait to read more of this!
Nita
person Waywren Truesong
schedule May 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh albus, albus, albus. If nothing else you should have taken Fawkes\' departure as a hint. *shakes her head* Fixing -that- little red wagon...
person alicia
schedule May 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
more soon I hope. I love this story
person amethystangel
schedule May 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
May I award one pissed off castle 1000 points... and hope it put Dumbledore in an oubliette?