AFF Fiction Portal
person DBZVelena
schedule July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
And anothreatreat chapter of a story so good it could rival the original.
Have you ever considered writing for a living?
You\'re stories would no doubt rock the universe!
person dedmun
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
like this story lots. am enjoying it greatly. keep up the great work.
person Ginger
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful I wait for each chapter to come out.
person lisatiza84
schedule June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awesome. awesome. awesome. I love every little letter of this story. *sitting on edge of chair waiting for updates*
person annie
schedule June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
freakin wonderful.. stupid senile old Dumbledore, he really is a crazy manipulating bastard. finally harry is starting to realize this can
person sak
schedule June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Everytime I think that the mess might be starting to sort itself out, another piece or bit of information is revealed. The Slytherin Gen Gentry bloodlines are tainted? And all of Albus\' sins lined up together do not sound pretty. As ever an intriguing and engrossing story. I anticipate more.
person GEmory
schedule June 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The things Albus has done have been so spread over your story, I didn\'t realize how completely horrible it was until it was all ed ied in one place. He really is a fool, and a criminal. And he doesn\'t even think he\'s done anything wrong. Great chapter.
person iccle mousie the potions ingredient
schedule June 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE!!! pleeeeeeeeeeeeeease?
person alicia
schedule June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
more soon. I gotta know if the castle did that to albus or Luna
person DEDMUN
schedule June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
DUDE THIS WAS GREAT! REALLY. LOVE THEFINEFINEMENT OF ALBUS. THAT WAS TOO FUNNY. HE\'S IN SO MUCH TROUBLE. TOTALLY GET HIM.

MOLLY IS IN DEEP WITH THE FAM. TURNING AWAY HER STEPMOTHER AND SISTERS LIKE THAT. BUT I\'M NOT SURPRISED. IT\'S FUNNY HOW SHE\'S SELECTIVELY PROTECTIVE WHEN IT COMES TO FAMIL
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KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK, AND TOTALLY CAN\'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE.