AFF Fiction Portal
person satikat
schedule October 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, please write more! I\'m enthralled!
person Hexia
schedule October 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story - brilliant plot - and I\'m just a irritating prat, that wants up dates ASAP!!!!!
Love it!!!

*lol* Love Hexia
person Slant
schedule October 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful story. Extremely well written with a great plot and an intriguing storyline. I\'m definitely hooked. I like your characterizations; I enjoy noncanon more than those that stick with the books. Your writing style is decidedly more mature than most of what I find here, and it\'s a refreshing change. If you\'re a readerugh,ugh, there are a few good fics around. I originally thought thatwas was a HP/SS which is what drew me to it in the first place, but I liked it so much that I\'d continue even if it was *shudder* het. (No offense to all het writers). So now you\'ve got yourself an impatient fan.
person Genita
schedule October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is such a good story! Absolutely can\'t wait to read more! Can\'t help but be curious as to what the ancestoral tattooing on Harry\'s arm all means...Which symbol means what? LOL...and, What will become of Draco??? ( I think Harry\'s just the Wizard to line Draco\'s spoiled little butt out!) LOL....Please hurry with more!
Genita
person Key
schedule October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story, one of the only reasons I\'ve been checking AFF for updates. I can honestly say I haven\'t read anything like this story anywhere else, and with the sheer volume of HP stories on the net that\'s saying something! I must admit I was hoping for HP/SS, but I\'ll keep reading regardless!
person michelle
schedule October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
read all 8 chapters so far really like...
imaginative and original
also thankful that you update frequently
love it keep going
person Kiristeen
schedule October 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ouch! in a big way. I understand most of what Narcissa did, but killing her husband and herself in front of Draco, well, that just may have broken him. I feel for him -- even if he *does* still turn out bad. I wouldn\'t wish that on *anyone*.


Kiri
person Arwen Rayne
schedule October 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WANT MORE. MUST HAVE MORE..... Could you possibly put me on your mailing list so I know when you update? I have been trying to find this story for ages and just now found it again. I do admire your work. Good grammar, excellent plot- all around superb..
person Petunia
schedule October 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is very good! It\'s nice to see how you have thought Lily\'s backgroud out, not just summing it up like \"a lon forgotten line of squibs\", which is disgustingly common. Who is the Ravenclaw student??? I\'m eagerly waiting for more!
person Sky
schedule October 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update. This story just keeps getting better.