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person Arwen Rayne
schedule October 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Have I told you yet this week that I love your writing? Yeah!! I love your writing...
person Shawn Pickett
schedule October 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Outstanding story, I find the whole apprentice program intriguing. I normally don\'t care for slash stories, but if this one does go slash, I would defintely keep reading. Great job, thank you.
person Petunia
schedule October 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
The same good quality as before, despite the problems!

It will be interesting to see, how Draco will fit in with the rest of the apprentices - he seemed to have a little attitude problem for the thing... on top of his other problems. The seventh one: Luna Lovegood? She was going somewhere for the summer with her father, wasn\'t she?

I guess, like Harry, that he can say goodbye to his friendship with Ron and Hermione. Hermione will be absolutely green with envy, and Ron will have kittens because the Weasleys don\'t have the money for him to partisipate. I can so see Hermione going into a rant about it not being possible for muggle borns to participate - and Merlin help those who don\greegree! It doesn\'t look like wou would be able to spend much time together anyway...

That cauldron smuggler was a nice detail! *siggers*

Well, it will be most interesting to see what you have in store for us in the future!

~Petunia
person chantalmalfoy
schedule October 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Draco\'s still being a jerk. That figures.
Well, maybe he\'ll grow up soon.
person Veronica
schedule October 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I know....I know (waves hand and jumps up and down, just like Hermione).......Remus\'s mate is Severus right....lol....the clues are there and I saw them. (at least I hope that right \'cause other wise I will look darn stupid..lol).....Please write more soon, this story is my favorite story on aff.net.......more asap please!!!!!!!!!!
person chantalmalfoy
schedule October 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
sorry to hear about your computer problems.

So, Sev. is Remus\' mate? What about Harry? Maybe a threesome? lol... ok, maybe not.
Is Sev. going to check Draco to see if he has tattoos too? And who\'s the third boy? Is it
Neville? I hope you update again soon.


person jenbachand
schedule October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
GREAT STORY!! I had been meaning to read this forever, but never got around to it. Glad I was able to take it all in at once. It\'s very interesting and surprisingly funny. Are you going to have the spell cast on Neville and Draco too? Wondering if they have the same kinds of protections. Update soon, and if you have an e-mail list for this story add me to it.

Jen :)
person ciceronian
schedule October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Your story is very intriguing and immediately drew me in, I simply could not stop reading it. Really interested in the idea of Alice, Lily, and Narcissa being friends when they were young and using theior abilities to protect their children. Also, if my understanding is correct I love the idea of Sev being Remus\' mate. Can\'t wait for your next update, keep up the amazing work! ~ciceronian~
person PrideAndPrejudice
schedule October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Intersting...is Snape by chance Remus\'s life mate? if so odd pairing in my oppinion. but hey you are the writer after all....you have your reasonorryorry bout the computer crash...know how much that sucks. Just a thought, I know you will probably have it in later chapters but let the reader know who hellion ice viper and the rest are....it\'s kind of easy to see....but when you aren\'t reading closely most people won\'t catch it. Keep it up. it\'s wonderful.
PAP
person Sarah
schedule October 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this so far. How long will it be, approxamately? I wouldn\'t mind if it was a Harry/Draco fic and maybe Snape as a father figure to Harry. Just my thoughts, do what you want. I\'lltinutinue reading anyway. I have not read anything like this before, but I love it. Keep the chapter coming!
Good luck!
Sarah