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Just found this and have spent hours reading it and all I can say is BLOODY BRILLIANT!!!
Has to be one of the most addictive HP fics i\'ve read.
Really hope you get a chance to update soon!

This is the first time I've had to read & review in months. I've spent the last couple days rereading from chapter 1 to the current chapters. I'll say it again, I really love this story. I like where you're going with the interaction with the characters & love that Remus & Severus kissed. :) Maybe Harry could look some Beard Burning charms for Dumbledore.

Keep up the good work & update soon!

Jen :)

pleeeeeeease update soon! please!

I am so happy to see that you have updated! It is great! I know I am not alone in hoping that you update soon! I have added you to my favorites.

Yea Lisa!
I was so glad to see another chapter posted. Made my day.
I like Bill. I've always liked Bill. The goblins are interesting.
I was hoping for Blaze and Harry instead of Seamus and Harry, but you are the
boss.
Albus is going to have to really step in it publicly for most people to begin to distrust his
opinion. I like that Arthur is life debted to Harry. I hadn't thought about that before, love it
when someone brings facts like that to light.
If you let Hermione out there will be fireworks. Personally I think Ginny might be a better choice.
She too is life debted to Harry. Perhaps Hermione should bring that up. I can see Bill putting Ron
in his place. Although in the end it will have to be Harry who tells the prat to grow up & open his eyes.
Ron would be an excellent person for Dumbly to use/abuse that might turn the tide of opinion, at least in
the Weasley contengent.
Thanks for entertaining me this a.m.
Viki

:) Hey, told ya I'd review here, too. ;) hehehe. Glad to see the section breaks appeared here, at least. ff.net is sometimes weird with the "published" version of documents, I know. So... Why did Dumbledore want Neville to be better guarded by being in the Apprenticeship Program at the school? Because he COULD have been the Boy-Who-Lived? Or for some other reason? I have to chuckle at the Hermione part, but not entirely in humor. You've got a point: Hermione very well COULD go to the authority figures with what the Apprentices could tell her... Then again, they don't know about her being in the Teaching Apprenticeship Program, nor about her revelation that Dumbledore was manipulating HER life like he had been Harry's.... That could work to keep her sided with the Apprentices... And though it would be no problem for the Apprentices to break the Fidelius and retrieve Hermione, what would they do about the others? Say, "Hi, you're at Hogwarts. Yes, we let ourselves in; we can do that, we control the castle. No, sorry, we need Hermione's researkillkills; you lot have to stay put. No, we're not really gonna tell you anything more. No, stay there. Bye now." Yeah... THAT'D go over well! ;) hahaha. Ron'd NEVER talk to Harry again after that, I bet. Although I bet the twins would be a resource, and probably Ginny, too, but even if they *were* "recruited" to help out, that still leaves Ron and Dean down in the "Fidelius rooms" (for lack of a better word), knowing that they're being left out of something...several somethings... I'm interested to see how you work around this one. (B/c it's not like they can just take Hermione and not tell anyone... What with Fred/George/Ginny all able to get into Hermione's room, it's not like they can pretend that she locked herself in or anything...) :) lol, well, anyway, those were some more thoughts I had the second time around. :) Thanks again for updating (and not abandoning the story as I confess that I was afraid you had!), and I will wait anxiously (though...mostly...patiently ;) lol) for the next chapter. :-D ciao!

another installment! yay! this story is so great. i love knowing what is happening next. and albus! he's so interesting in this fic with all his manipulations he is just short of an evil guy. this chapter was a little short. or maybe that's my imagination. but anyway, it was great. lots of filler information. things are being started. i was a little dissapointed to hear so little of the "kiss", but i figure i just have to have patience. i look forward to knowing more.

Another chapter! I'm so happy to see a new one! I love the hints that all is not weith ith Albus's reputation in the world. Serves him right of course, but I like the rumors about the goblins if a bit surprised about which way Arthur would fall. As for Dumbledore himself, he does not seem to budge from his view he? he? And I enjoyed the almost caress from Seamus and Dobby's independence. I cannot wait for more.

I read your story after a recommendation from Anime. I must say that your plot and treatment has fascinated me. There are a few grammar and spelling mistakes that a good editor would take care of.
What I really found interesting was your plot and the way you are handling thiory.ory. I relish the idea that four young sorceresses could outwit so many people. I like the way that you didn't make Draco and Harry fall into each others arms, that they are willing to take each incident as it happen als also like the way you have Molly Weasley and Dumbledore not as white as white, slightly OOC but you have written it very well.
If you could send me an email whenever you update, I would appreciate it. Thank you.
Hope you a post a chapter asap.
Tinnidawg

LOVE IT BUT WHO IS PHILOMENA AND WHAT HAPPENED TO HER.