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November 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, it should be an interesting conversation between Harry and Dumbledore, if Harry chooses to mention it. At the very least, Kingsley had probably better watch his back, I think Harry\'s a wee bit ticked at him. I liked Professor Snape reflecting that through ignorance and sheer determination Harry managed to, yet again, accomplish the impossible. I really like the way you have the characters growing in this story, and the writing style has been excellent, thank you, I can\'t wait to see more.
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November 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Aww... Neville\'s taking the blame. I got a little exicted when Remus levitated
Harry into the bed before I realized that it was very doubtful that any of them
would be able to do anything anyway... oh well. Hope to see some Draco soon.
Harry into the bed before I realized that it was very doubtful that any of them
would be able to do anything anyway... oh well. Hope to see some Draco soon.
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November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Fascinating story, just love what you up up so far. The bit with the Gentry family is wonderful. I can\'t wait to read another chapter
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November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Good cap!!!! :o)
But I\'m still dying for MORE!!!!
Please be my favorit author and up date soon :o)
Love
Hexia
But I\'m still dying for MORE!!!!
Please be my favorit author and up date soon :o)
Love
Hexia
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November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter, Harry seems to be rising to the occasion well. It will be interesting to see what Severus winds up thinking of him when this is all through. Great work, thank you.
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November 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
......-Wow-. Oh please say you\'re doing more. Please please please.
I wish I could be more coherent, but it\'s six in the morning and I\'ve been up since... er... six in the morning yesterday. Ehe.
I wish I could be more coherent, but it\'s six in the morning and I\'ve been up since... er... six in the morning yesterday. Ehe.
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October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAH! You can\'t stop here!!!!!!!!!!
PLEASE write more SOON!!!
This is so good - action and all - I\'m dying to know more!!!
Please up date soon!!!
love
Hexia
PLEASE write more SOON!!!
This is so good - action and all - I\'m dying to know more!!!
Please up date soon!!!
love
Hexia
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October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, the shit really has hit the fan at Hogwarts. The students are doing somewwellwell at handling the issues (though I see some first aid training with Madam Pomfry in their future.) Great work, can\'t wait to see more.
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October 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i\'ve really been enjoying your story, which is why i have to ask this question:
did anyone proofread your chapter eleven? it\'s a mess. the story\'s great but your grammar and sentence structure flew out the window.
if you\'d like a beta, or another beta, feel free to email me.
did anyone proofread your chapter eleven? it\'s a mess. the story\'s great but your grammar and sentence structure flew out the window.
if you\'d like a beta, or another beta, feel free to email me.
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October 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AAAHHH!!! They have to save Sev. Don\'t know why Karkaroff is there,
but I\'m sure we\'ll find out. And Draco was sent away? Hmm... maybe
he\'ll come back in a better mood...
Poor Remus, he feels worthless...
Can\'t wait for the next chapter!
but I\'m sure we\'ll find out. And Draco was sent away? Hmm... maybe
he\'ll come back in a better mood...
Poor Remus, he feels worthless...
Can\'t wait for the next chapter!