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Actually this is for chapter fifteen and the whole story. The chapter where you explained about the lineage postion and why the tattoos would appear on him, especially learning that the old families kept lineage grimoirs that were magically updated whenever the potion was used.

Here is an idea: What if the Ministry of Magic has such a book and that whenever a marriage contract is enacted it gets put into the book? If a person where to take a lineage potion and or decide to have the tattoos appear on their skin, then this information automaticly goes out to the Ministry Lineage book and also to those who are hog ang any and all inheritances for the true heir. If this is true, What if the True Heir of the Lineage Line, in certain situations is the one that must be consulted and agree to any marriages or magical agreements concerning the family?

Well, what if Harry Potter is the direct decendant of Salazar Slytherine through the second squib daughter that the wizarding world lost track of during that scandal that you wrote about that happened in the 1600\'s? That would mean that Harry Potter would have to approve the marriage contract of Draco Malfory has the Heir of the Slytherine families/clan. And knowing Fudge, he didn\'t bother to check to see if there was one he had to get approval from for the marriage contract to happen.

Wouldn\'t it be funny if at the end of the sermon and everyone has to sign the contract and every signature on it magically bursts into flame scouring the signature sights cl And And after, magical writing appears in red where the contract words were saying that illegal marriage contract and penalties being inacted against the bride\'s family and Cornelius Fudge Minister of Magic. Then it adds, for attempting illegal marriage all former contracts and deals with or concerning Draco Malfoy are null and void Due to not being improved by The Heir of the Slytherine line Harry Potter bearer of the Slytherine Lineage tattoo.

Your story has gotten me thinking and excited to read. I really like this new Harry Potter being blunt and telling how it is. He isn\'t going to take it from those who feels he should act a certain way. I wish Fudge and Percy would try and get into it with Harry I think he would make them sweat. I want to see Fudge and Percy get what they deserve. Here is Fudge trying to pass laws against the Aprentices and it would be heavily ironic if he loses his post as Minister because he violated an ancient marriage contract rules and rituals.

I want to read more of this story and look forward to reading part sixteen. I think pompus Fudge and Percy are about to get a magor smack down for what they have done against those who don\'t agree with them. And Harry Potter, Draco Malfory, and the rest of the Apprentices are going to give it to them.

Brilliant job! I loved this chapter. Thank god for Fred and George! It seemed like every other one of Harry\'s old \"friends\" left out of app apprentice program showed up at Hogwarts determined to prove just what an arse they can be. The funny part is, the way this is going, by the time Harry is done, they\'ll be kissing his arse every bit as much as they kiss Dumbledore\'s. While I am not a big fan of Harry slash stories, it would make an interesting development after all of the bullshit his \"friends\" gave Seamus. Again, wonderfull work, can\'t wait to see more.

Wow! Thas ans an amazing chapter. I loved the scene with Hermione, she can be anoying at times and someone should take her down a peg or two. Just because she has an opinion on somethings nos not make it right. Harry\'s reply to her was great. I can\'t wait for the next chapter. I sinceraly hope that you continue to update frequently.

Loving it. Too bad his \"friends\" are being gits about everything. Hope things settle down some soon, doubt it though, but the geneology and stuff is great. It\'s a great story.

Jen :)

Awesome, Darling. This has to be one of the best fics going currently. Thanks a bunch for putting so much into it for us.

Dumbledore is nucking futs, he has to be. Malfoy\'s wedding, not listening to Harry, letting teenagers run Hogwarts.
Great chapter, oh so very entertaining

Oh dear. I start to feel exhausted by just reading this.

...What planet does Dumbledore live on...?

I am really enjoying this story and I can\'t wait for the next chapter. I like the pairing of Remus and Severus. This story is so much better written then any of the other fics I have read detailing Harry\'s geneology. Keep up the good work.

This is geting scary! For my over-imaginative little brain anyway... The Order is in for serious trouble, methinks. It is no good that their spy is out of the picture for God knows how long. And Albus has little time to find a new teacher for potions. Not a very clever move from Shacklebolt. ...Do the Apprentices still trust the Order?

*snigger* Seamus was so right with that last remark of his!

LOL, oh I love their excuse for Snape\'s injury. And Shacklebolt can\'t naysay that because he would have to come clean about what he did. Now he is going to be pulling his hair out trying to figure out how Snape kept his hands. I really love this story and can\'t wait for the next chapter