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person jenbachand
schedule November 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
:) Yea!!! New chapter. And a great chapter at that. Interesting thing about the histories of the students. This is one of the most unique stories out there. Really enjoying it.

Jen :)
person Arwen Rayne
schedule November 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Another fantastic chapter. I wish I could write this well.
person Kateri
schedule November 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
O Tha That was an amazing chapter. I thought Percy fainting was a nice touch. Well, Harry\'s lil bomb shell certainly will give the Slytherins something to think about.
person Petunia
schedule November 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow... (Again.) Am somewhat speechless at the moment. Bombs dropped to left and right. I guess Harry has a few questions to answer eventhough he escaped the Great Hall. And I bet he wants to get some answers, too - I know *I* want to! A *very* interesting cer. er. Hopefully \'the little terrors\' let you write the next chapter fast...!
person Anon
schedule November 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
best way to put it FANFUCKINTASTIC vary good please countiune or a few people will die from waiting
person PeachDancer82
schedule November 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
you know I really thought this would be a Draco Harry story, for which I really hope you can still do seeing as how Pansy\'s in love w/ Vin *hint hint* anywayPLEEEEASE? I really really enjoy your story and your writing style is simply amazing I thoughrly enjoy the plot lines you are setting up as well. I you could email me an update, i\'d be grateful.
ciao
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person Waywren Truesong
schedule November 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*hauls self back into chair* Holhit-hit-. Um. Wow. Harry, you -do- realise that reguardless of sexual preference it\'s your duty to have kids, right? You\'re the last scion of waaaaaay too many lines.

What\'s up with Molly, anyway? Why does Apprenticeship have her so freaked? What -is- \'the proper way of thinking\'? Albus is doing it, so that can\'t be the problem, and it\'s not as if Harry\'s going to be anti-Muggle - if he isn\'t by now he isn\'t going to be -ever-.

(Interesting - has Harry quite realised that thanks to Apprenticeship he\'s never going back to the Dursleys again? Perhaps he should mention that to Hermione.)

Intriguing bit with the hair; I hope you give more details on the meaning of all this, and other little shades of meaning in Wizarding culture. Gift Child? Of Aisling no less! Shadowyn? Tho I -am- glad Harr fin finally having it long - there\'s not a thing wrong with his hair being too long and thus heavy to flutter about won\'t fix.

Reread all the chapters before this; I\'m glad Ginny\'s being at least semireasonable, if quiet. Someone to talk to, later. And the twins seem okay.

Draco, do not play \'My suc sucks more than yours does\' with Harry. You will not win.

*cackles* I loved that - \'Draco, I am sick of your attitude. I am ripping open your box - have some sunlight. Tired of shit? Have some reality. Welcome to the real world, Jr Mushroom Man.\'

Very clever of Draco, naming Harry secondary Guardian. If it becomes neccessary, he -will- do it, and do it well, and Draco\'s once again nicely covered on all bases.

Poor Sea. Don\'t fret so - Harry\'s used to public hoorahw, and after the Heir of Slytherin bit nobody will be focusing on his relations, fictional or otherwise, with -you-.
person Hexia
schedule November 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Let me just say this: WAAAAAAUUUUUUUUVVV! OMG!
MORE!!! Please...?
How do you do it?????? So
person Jenna
schedule November 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 15 is great. I can\'t wait for the next chapter. que question, is Neville going to be gay? If so, I think you should put him with Ron just to freak out the rest of the Weasley family. Just a suggestion. I really liked the way you have portrayed Harry. It\'s about time he was portd asd as more than a winey kid. Harry should have told Mrs. Weasley off sooner. She is not his mother/guardian even if she thinks she should be. The only person Harry should have to answer to is Remus as he is the only person left that cares about Harry Potter the person not Harry Potter The Boy Who Lived.
person Waywren Truesong
schedule November 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Actually, Kingsley Shacklebolt is a big black dude with no hair who looks like Morpheus. ^^ (At least I always imagine him so.)

Oh, hell. Damn it, Nev! You\'re no good to them if you drive yourself into the ground - they\'ll just end up having to take care of -you-, too.

*winces* I hate it that Harry can spot an abuse victim at fifty paces.

*watches Harry think on his feet and give coherent, useful orders* -This- is why they put you in charge, Harry love. because you make the decisions... no matter how hard. Oh, Harry.

*sigh* A little extreme on Hermione\'s part, but it -is- a logical reaction, from my impression or. r. I don\'t remember her being especially cruel to Luna, though.


*blinks at Harry vs Molly Weasley* Um. Wow. *sigh* So is Molly a homophobe, or just freaked because Harry\'s \ing ing in sin?\' As if he\'s had -time- to live in sin. They\'re TOO F*CKING TIRED! But good on Harry for not taking any shit this chapter. He\'s just doing what he thought was right.