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person Kat Denton
schedule November 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Lisa, great story, interesting set up and I\'m loving the details of Wizarding Tradition. I swooned over Lucius\' long hair in the second movie, so having a man\'s hair be an indicator of social status just hits a button of min>. >. I like the fact that you\'ve actually made Harry a pureblood. Lilly being from a Squib family that \'droppped out\' of Wizarding life makes sense and also gives Petunia some REASON besides jealousy for reacting the way she does in the first movie. She\'s not afraid of Hagrid in the Hut on the Rock, just pissed off.

I\'m guessing that the fact that Neville, Draco, Harry and Blaize\'s (I\'m assuming that Asling Morrigan is the same one as the one who snuck supplies from Madam P) moms were best friends will crop up again. Looking forward to where you go with that, and learning more about a \'classical\' wizarding education. Question, I understand the Art and Music part, but why jewerly making, why not weaving, for example?

Looking forward to more! Hope you update soon. Kat in KS
person Waywren Truesong
schedule November 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wai! Infodump!

Waywren asks, \"Why does it not surprise me that the Weasleys are famous for being rampant antitraditionalists?\"
Magistra says, \"Because you know Gred and Forge.\"
Waywren says, \"This is true.\"

Good egg on Seamus and Harry exploiting the SPEW tactic...

It wasn\'t until I reread 16 just now that I realised what \'Giftchild\' had to mean. Nice to see I was right - this kicks ass.

As for an alternative to asking Zabini, or perhaps as a backup informant, couldn\'t Harry ask Neville? Tho the Morrigans do seem to be as high-old-family as Harry seems to need.

*sigh* Poor Harry. Everything gets dumped on him... including Hogwarts\' irritation at the hoorah. Somebody get that boy some Excedrin.
person Felicia
schedule November 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You have great writing, and a wonderful imagination. I love your plotting and characterizations of the already beloved characters. ( I also love how you protray snape and harry.) My only suggestion, which actually i see very little in fic, is that there is little suspence. You tell everything almost right away. Which of course leviates frustrations, but also diminishes suspense. But then again your plot keeps me turning pages, and looking everyday for a new posting. Keep up the great job.
person Elly
schedule November 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thank you Lisa, again a very nice chapter.
person Shawn Pickett
schedule November 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, I\'m anxious to see more. I\'m curious to see how Harry sorts the whole proper wife and heir bit. I think the wizarding world might be close to pushing Harry to the point where he say screw you all, have fun with Voldemort. Thank you.
person Elly
schedule November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful. I am rereading again. I noticed a word missing in this chapter, about half into the story in the following sentence:

(Harry the Slytherin\'s of his year\'s talents about as well as his Gryffindor year mates because of the almost constant pairing of Gryffindor and Slytherin in double classes)

I think that \'knew\' is missing as a second word in that sentence.
person Shawn Pickett
schedule November 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, I really liked the lineage getting revealed at the wedding, it ought to give the Weasley\'s a rude awkening. I wonder if Hermione and the Weasleys are going to get their head\'s out of their collective arse\'s and start ting ing Harry like the friends they claim to be. I also liked to see the shades of Malfoy coming around, or at least dropping the thought of serving moldyshorts. Can\'t wait to see more.
person Hexia
schedule November 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!!!!
person Jenna
schedule November 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Chapter sixteen was great. I can\'t wait for the next chapter so that I can see how everyone reacts to the news about Harry\'s anchestry. I hope that the next chapter also has some explination about everyone else\'s anchestry. I am particarly interested in Seamus and Blaise.
person Kiristeen
schedule November 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That\'s quite the lineage. LOL

Loved the \"political thinking\" of Draco when he named Potter the sdarydary choice for guardian. Very Slytherin.

Can\'t wait to read more. : )


Kiri