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The last few chapters have been great. I can\'t wait for the next chapter. I am wondering how you are going to have Aisling acting with the 3 sons of her dead/damaged friends. I hope that Aisling and Severus have at least 1 indepth conversation while you have her at Hogwarts. Hopefully their talking to each other will reveal a little more about Blaise, Draco, Harry, and Nevilles\' mothers past.

I like it. Can\'t what for more.

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love to story

VERY Interesting. I really liked the lineage book. Great story as always. Good to see the way the romances are progressing. Glad you are bringing Hermione in more too. Great work on Dumbledore shooting down Fudge too!

Thanks for the update.

Jen :)

Read the four latest - no wonder if you have problems handling the story, there is so much happening! And everyone seems to be awfully chatty. ;)

I definitely didn\'t see that Grindewald-part coming...! But he isnin Hin Harry\'s line, is he? ...Why isn\'t Tonks the Heir? Is it because her father is born out of wedlock? Bastards don\'t count? Or is it because Lily was a witch and William is a squib?

Oh, and I noticed a small discrepancy: in ch 20 Rose\'s (Dursley) second name is Annabelle, in ch 23 it\'s Lily...

Were the \"blank\" pages in the diary about Lily being the Heir of Slytherin?

How much time has there actually gone since the apprentices arrived?? Around 10 days? Two weeks? They *have* been busy...

=D

this is such a wonderful story, I love it. Hope you update soon and could you send me a mail when you do?


And please don\'t make SF and HP a couple, I don\'t thing they have the time for any fluff.

Oh and could Ron and Granger still be mad at Harry, Harry being only with the \'group\', and everybody scared of Harry and the \'group\'? Please

This is a very very well written story! I LOVE it. I ca wai wait to see where you take it!

Thanks for writing!

Harry and Seamus sharing a room... hmm... :) I see Snape is back to being a git.
I can\'t wait to see how this little war between Dumbledore and Fudge plays out. I
think Harry\'s getting quite angry with Dumbledore. This is a great fic. I can\'t wait for more.

I think I\'m feeling a little bit sorry for Ron. First he\'s leftind ind by Harry in the full apprentice program because his family is poor, and now he\'ll be left behind by Hermione in the modified apprentice program because he\'s not smart. Of course, if he behaves like a jealous, immature git about it all; I\'ll stop feeling sorry for him again. :)

I continue to be thoroughly impressed by this story. It\'s almost more detailed and convoluted than the HP books themselves.
Keep up the good work! (cuz I, for one, just can\'t get enough.)