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person Merrideth
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE CONTIUE!!!! AM VERY INTERESTED!!!! ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY!!!!

merrideth
person GEmory
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Terrific as usual. I really like all the detail; you\'ve obviously thought about all this for a long time. I figured Ron would act like a prat about Hermione too. I just hope she and Harry resume their friendship after she gets back to Hogwarts.
person Alexis Skye
schedule January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hmm how do you know when its time to see the next chapter an dall? is harry stilll wearing glasses?
schedule January 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely fabulous last few chapters. It just gets better with each one. I like how you have all of these detailed inner plotlines within the larger plotlines. You\'re doing a bang-up job with this story--I am just amazed with it all. I hope that you update soon because it\'s good! You tell a fabulous story, hon. ^_^

Ciao^_^
person Shawn Pickett
schedule January 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, Severus doesn\'t seem to being ing Harry in charge very well, huh? Can\'t wait to see what\'s next.
person Shawn Pickett
schedule January 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting, I\'m enjoying the picture we are getting from Lily\'s journals, can\'t wait to see more, thank you.
person Shawn Pickett
schedule January 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m not sure which I liked better, Harry doing take ake charge thing and totaly ignoring Professor Snape, or Dumbledore steamrollering right over Fudge and his bit of political stupidity. Brilliant chapter all around, thank you.
person slashgoddess
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow... i just checked back in and you\'d added on like 7 or 8 more chapters than the last time i\'d checked! could you please email me when you update? You\'re a fantastic writer!
person DBZVelena
schedule January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'d just like to say, please hurry with next chapters.
I check for updates almost every day, i love this story soooooooo much!!!!!!!!
^_^
person bagheera
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A~ha! Yet another magnificient Harry Potter fic! I\'m seeing a pattern... the best Harry Potter fics are writte by women with children. *grins*
This is: original, with wonderful tension, nice character development, very interesting choice of main characters (the apprentices!) , fascinating ideas about heritage and such... I hope it\'ll get a lot longer for there is a lot I\'m still very curious about. And I\'m fairly sure about who is Remus mate... hard task for him!