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person sharee
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey you have a great story going here i hope to god you plan on finishing it or i just may have to hunt you down and crucio you until you comply. do you think you could notify me when you up date? that would be awsome. ne way keep up the excellent work!!!
Sharee
person dave gerecke
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wish you\'d get with it and write some more!
I really enjoyed the other chapters and am missing my fix.
So, how about it.
dave
person Hawthorn
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
God I love this fic. Please whatever you do never stop writing this one until you reach a satisfying \'The End\' Please!!!
person Shinigami24
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*eyes widen* Harry\'s gonna be pissed! Cuz he has enough on his plate w/o adding this to his plate... And I getr the feeling he won\'t fully trust Dumbledore again... But how come the castle didn\'t try to bond with Neville, since he is the heir of Gryffindor? And pls have someone give Dumbledore a swift kick in the pants!
person opie
schedule January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank You. I\'m loving this story. The plot has me hooked. Your characterization of existing JKR characters is very interesting if not always spot on. I\'d hold this up as an example of how to put together a truely engaging story.
person Shawn Pickett
schedule January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, I love the boys explaining to Severus that divination has been dead usefull in teaching them to bluff their way through homework. I can\'t wait to see the result of Albus\'s meddling, I have a feeling that Harry\'s going to wind up taking a huge bite out of his backside. Your very evil for putting the tatoo explanation off for another chapter though (I\'m to impatient). Again, great job, can\'t wait to see more.
person Kateri
schedule January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
whoa!! Talk about an amazing chapter. I see that Sev doesn\'t know that Igor is geing held prisioner by the students up in a tower, and his cover wiwth voldie is great.... now on the the biggie... OMG!!! I can\'t believe what Dumbledore has planned, if Harry ever finds out that he planned this, and I wouldn\'t put it past Harry, then I doubt he would ever truly trust the Headmaster ever again. In a strange way Sev seems to be becoming the major adult influance in Harry\'s . Ka.
person Jessica
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You need to write! Please! I love this story and nt tnt to see what is happening next!

Jess
person Hexia
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn it, woman!!!! You\'re soooo good! Please give us more!!!!

Lots of love and longings
Hexia
person Aaron
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your story is alot better than I thought it would be when I saw it on the adult fanction website which usually only has erotic stories. You should think of putting it up on fanfiction.net as it\'s quite good and more people will see it there.