rate_review Reviews

This was an awesome story! Very well written and detail oriented...I felt like I was really part of this story, which is something that I have not felt while reading fanfiction in a long while. Please, please, please update soon!! :-)

Keep up the GREAT work!! :-)

Yeah! That was fun. I really love the way you are turning the boys into sensitive caring macho men! And, yes, I love the Dumbledore bashing. I am sure he is going to turn out to be a wonderful old man in JKRs books but he just SO needs his arse kicked.

Dumbledore is an idiot - he really has no idea what he is doing, has he? Why should Harry\'s portkey take him to Hedmaster\'s office if the others go to the tower? If Dumbledore fears he might have been taken against his will, wouldn\'t the hospital wing be more logical destination? Poor Albus is really loosing his touch... And trying to make decisionr Har Harry again. Tsk, tsk.

Now I\'m *really* curious: what was in the letter from Angelina??? I have a few guesses, but is any of them even near the truth...?

And then that ending with a promise of an interesting discussion... You truly know how totureture your readers, don\'t you, Lisa? *pout*

~Petunia

i like it.
Hope you up date soon.
dave

enjoying the story, complex though it may be. In fact, this most recent chappie was almost a little too complex. I know you don\'t want to explain too much for fear of ruining the story, but you may want to check to make sure things make sense. It can be hard to write about the kinds of communication that goes on between a close-knit group of people (i. e. at the funeral) because sometimes the reader misses out on what\'s going on as much as the characters that are outside the group. I got the gist of what happened, but felt I missed a lot.
Otherwise I really like the story. You do a great job of writing and the plot is very cool. Keep it up!

Another interesting chapter. That bit at the end with Fred and Hermione talking was interesting and added another twist to the story. This is getting really good and I\'ll be back for more.

Ciao!

This is one of the best stories i\'ve read in a long time!
I\'m keeping track of it as you update.
But I really hope Harry will get at least a little break soon. Or he\'ll go stir crazy!

Ron is still being an idiot, and a twin got married! I love this story. Especially love how Harry and the group are pushing Dumbledore aside and taking charge of their lives. At least, at much as they can. I also like how Hermione is getting closer to Fred, and that he\'s being so supportive. Hopefully, Hermione and Harry will be rebuilding their friendship as well.

pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease can we have the next chapter soon?

Come on. Up date already. I need my fix.
Am presently re-reading the other chapters again (3rd time through or 4th) and want my fix.
dave