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for Fate\'s Pawns

by SnapesPetPixie

person sushified
schedule October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story. You are a wonderful writer. Please update soon!
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely lovely! Please continue??
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story so far!! I am forward to reading more of it!
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You have me so very intrigued...can\'t wait to see what exactly is going on...

Shem
person Rilla
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Poor drunken Hermione! I wonder how much she\'ll tell Snape.
person Deb>^..^<
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Looking good & enjoying the drunken ride;-) Keep it coming!!! Deb >^..^<
person Rilla
schedule October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Tease! I like the smooth transitions between their thoughts. It\'s nice to see what is going on in both heads and you convey that well.
person amethsyt
schedule October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very good story so far. One minor error though. Hagrid is older than Snape. According the canon and JKR interviews, Hagrid should be in his mid sixties while snape is in the mid to late thirties.
person shemhamforash
schedule October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This storyline is captivating...you are doing a magnificent job...eager for more

Shem xxx
person shemhamforash
schedule October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AAhhhh. your getting very good at silent sarcastic prose my sweet...love inner musings of both Sev and Hermione and as a side note...serves them both bloody right...

loving it wanting more...

Shem xxx