rate_review Reviews

Great fic! I love it so far! It\'s well written, and I like the way you\'ve portrayed everyone. I can\'t wait to see what\'s going to happen next...write more soon! Nice work, tata for now!

Please write more of this, I\'m enjoying it immensely!

I love the idea of this story, but you need to work on your writing a bit. For instance, there was no need to describe in detail Draco undressing. Though if you\'re going to do something like that, you need to vary your sentence structure and break it up and bit so it doesn\'t sound like a list. Also, some of the wording was a bit awkward. You said: \"Harry pulled the knob in front of him towards himself. The cool water pierced his smooth skin.\" The first sentence is weighed down. You need to go simpler and just say something like \"Harry pulled out the knob in front of him.\" And in the second sentence? ^_^ If the water was piercing Harry\'s skin, then he\'d be bleeding all over the shower floor. Choose your words more carefully.

But I do really like this story. The characters\' reactions are fabulous and realistic. It\'s very enjoyable and a great premise. I\'m going to go back to reading now.

Ooh, now I\'m all intrigued. I\'m the person who left the anonymous review before. I didn\'t mean to; it was an accident. I still think you need to work on you writing a bit, but it\'s not so bad that a beta reader couldn\'t fix it. I can\'t wait to read more of this. ^_^

Oh I like this so far and I can\'t wait to see how Harry is going to react to the truth. So, are you going to have a section where Harry muses over his sexuality? You mentioned in an earlier chapter that he never really thought about it, then went into full Draco snoggage (not that I mind), but to tie it all together will you have Harry coming to grips with the fact that he IS attracted to Draco?

Either way, very good read and a very interesting fic. You included romance in the rain (my fav!) and are making it a good ride.

Update soon!

this looks promising... So far, I really like it! ^_^ keep up the good work and thanks for sharing!
- Chibimono Akuno

LMAO! This is very comical compaired to some that I have read that follow a similar line of thought. it\'s good, keep writing. The fact that you are having draco act not like draco really helps with the comical aspect. Kudos and good luck on the rest...I know I will at least keep reading it.
PAP

I want to see Harry in a dress!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D
More story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!