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March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Is English your second language? Your sentence structure is VERY awkward. I gave up reading after three paragraphs- it\'s driving me crazy. One word of advice- Beta!
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January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That was hot!
Though I hate Draco for leaving Hermione when she
Though I hate Draco for leaving Hermione when she
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January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! YOu couldn\eaveeave it like that!!!! It\'s extremley out of character for Draco, or any guy who wants to get laid, to just get up and leave a girl wet and horny like that!!!! Update this puppy SOON!!!!!!!
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October 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Do you have a beta reader? I noticed lots of spelling mistakes on this chapter, you see. I
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October 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OH! update soon! It\'s just getting good! :)
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October 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
that was a real big tease,i hope you have more in mind.
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October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Excellent beginning! I woudl love to see more -- I hope you publish the next part soon. This was very cool!
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October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I abslutely LOVE this idea! I love this s! U! Update soon.. PLEASE?!?!?
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October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very good start! This fic isn