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Just realized something glaringly obvious- fervesco= author of my favourite fics, i.e get hermione laid, stress relief and rules were made to be broken, hurrah!
have come up with solution, remus, severus and hermione just live in a happy threesome...*ponders*...yeah, cos severus would really love that one...*marvels at own sutpidity* well, i could always take him off her hands..
**Seva**

please let her stay with Remus! :\'(

I HAVE A SOLUTION!!! WRITE ALTERNATIVE ENDINGS! SO THE REMUS FANS CAN READ ON WHERE SHE STAYS WITH HIM, THE SEVERUS FANS CAN READ THE ONE WHERE SHE LEAVES REMUS FOR SEVERUS, AND THE UNSURE PEOPLE CAN JUST READ BOTH!!!!!! YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!

I would like to give you advice on which man gets the girl in the end, but as I am in the same boat, I don\'t think it would do any good. Maybe you cave ave her end with Snape and I\'ll have her end with Lupin in my story!! :-D I\'ve decided that I may have to write two endings.

As always, your writing has reduced me to bowing before the computer screen and screaming into the night \"GIVE ME MORE!!!!!!!!!\"

:hugs:::::
-Gwen

What the hell just happened here, indeed!
You wrote another great chapter!

To Hermione, I would like to say:

I have finally read your story and I must
say you are doing a splended job with it!
I love how you established a strong
relationship between Hermione and Severus
early on, making their breaking hard to
accept. Now that she is back with Remus
and old feelings are being stirred up, I am
feeling very emotional and confused with ng wng with her! *blush* Even though I am
screaming, Severus! Severus! My heart goes
out to Remus because he loves Hermione but
it is clear her heart belongs to Severus. I hope
you update soon.

Hugs,
Corazon

Great chapter! (yeah, I can enjoy a chapter with only Severus too).
I\'m looking forward next chapter... but I\'m beginning to wo.. i.. if the wolfie discovers that something is going on between his wife and the Potion Master, he will try to kill Severus :( not good, both guys are possessives and I don\'t want neither of them dead.

Ok, now my begging quota:
Please, please, please make Hermione stay with the wolfie please, please, please.

man, Poor Hermione has some serious considering to do. Past love vs. Present love...Ugh. I\'d hate to be in her shoes. However...Personally...I\'d chose Severus.

Red

m.she.she did it better..much better..but still not perfect...

Funny you should mention sending Sev over here for my nursing exams (pity if such should happen I would not be able to do the whole *turn your head and cough* thing whilst grabbing his balls)...had similar conversation with Daya a while agao, where I was explaining that when auscultating the chest of a man with heavy cheast hair, you needed to slightly dampen the hair for better conduction of sound. Anyway, I mentioned that it was so unfair that it is not acceptable to dampen chest hair with tongue...she countered by saying that if that man was Sev, it should be made mandatory to have to lick everypart of his body as part of assessment...I agreed naturally, then we moved on to discuss the benfits of those tight white uniforms with frontal ziiper all the way down...and ease of access if said patient was Potions Master. *sigh*..now if nusring exams wre more like that...I would definitly be studying every hour of the day...

Like I should be doing now.

Must admit that I have started ignoring people who use my muggle name far too used to Shem now...have also taken to writing responses to long answer questions as if I were chatting--sarcasm and all...Gollum is most impressed...Not sure about lecturers though.

Anyway, my critque of this chapter...*about bloody time* ::shut up Gollum::

Perfect. Sev\'s inner musings were right on. Very much in canon tha that I put much weight on that kind of shit), even with his obvious affection for Hermione.

I am not a very moralistic person (see profile) and as such extra-marrital affairs don\'t bother me (*ahem* as long as they involve Sev being the \"other man\")...so as far as I am concerned, you can bring on the SS/HG shgging now...but alas, I fear Hermione would disagree..

So I leave it all up to your far superior judgement (if you should breathe a word of my admission there, I wdenydeny it and take great pleasure in deducting as many house points as I can from Hufflepuff *smirk*, before I take your Sev away as punishment umm....I am sure he would enjoy my type of punishement as well *evil grin*)

Think I should go now, lest I shove my foot further in my mouth/up my arse...take your pick

Much love and respect...

Shem xxx (how much bloody room have I taken up?)

i dont usually review but i have to say that this story is by far one of the best ones ive read in a long time, when i see it at the top of the list saying it has been updated i cant help but get a slight excitement [yes i know my life is a dead loss] and i want to thatnk you for that, so please keep updating and my life might be a sucess!!!
lol
thanx
shaz