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for Rules Were Made to be Broken

by Fervesco

person slytherinhottie
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just found your story and was glued to it. I cant believe you ended chapter 15 like that, now I need a cold shower. Your Severis is so hot. I want him!!!!!! I cant wait for the next chapters make them longer if you can. And for gods sake post soon I am dying here.
person Kristine
schedule January 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
::giggle:: Poor Sevvie...Left all alone with his pants down...::cackle::
Not that I want to be mean...\'Cause I love the man...But, JEEZUS, the man moves fast! It\'s only been, what, a week? And he\'s all ready to shag Mrs. Lupin...::shakes head::
And DAMMIT, this is so hard!! I don\'t know who to root for in this story!! You write both relationships so well, and DAMNNIT, it\'s just hard...::growl::
::sigh:: Ya know what? I think I\'ll be satisfied with either couple in this story...I give up. :)
person icequeen
schedule December 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well, since the link to your Yahoo group isn\'t working, i\'ll just have to vote here. Damn it! It should be Hermione/Severus, and should stary that way. You decide how to break Remus and Hermione up. I don\'t really care, just as long as it ends with a good long smut scene and Hermione and Severus together
person MaddyRiddle
schedule December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Let\'s hope thxt oxt one doesn\'t take too long to write...
Ok, next chapter is Hermione\'s POV so... please, please, please more wolfie please.
Yes, I know, I\'m annoying... but someone has to stfor for poor sweet Remus *sigh*
person WendyNat
schedule December 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow... not very nice of Hermione, was it? Great chapter - can only imagine poor Sev\'s frustration at the end there. Update soon!
schedule December 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
An update on Rules Were Made to Be Broken and KE\'sGive Her Time both in the same morning! I think I\'ve died and gone to fanfic heaven.

Update soon and please be nice to the wolf!

~buttercup
person jkrazed
schedule December 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Talk about a cock-block. Who knew Hermione could be so cruel? Great chapter! Looking foward to the next!
person Jess
schedule December 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What revenge Ha just leave him hanging (For now anyway) great chapter ,so funny , but my heart still goes out to Remus....Jess
person tny1111
schedule December 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I know Snape is a bastard for trying to seduce a married woman, but man I feel bad for him there... She really led him on!! Tell me he will be happy soon!!
person deblovesdragon
schedule December 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
now that was downright cruel. leaving him painfully at attention like that just a hairsbreath from the actual act has got to be torture. not nice Hermione. not nice at all.