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for Rules Were Made to be Broken

by Fervesco

person Deb>^..^<
schedule October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am liking this so far & can\'t wait to see how you play out this challenge*
person shemhamforash
schedule October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ok...I am quite unsually at a loss as to what to say...usual sheild of sarcsm has deserted me so you will have to put up with painful (for me) sincerity..not that the sarcasm wouldn\'t have been genuinly praising..just not used to reviewing so candidly...feel open... exposed..Im rambling..I know..

Loving every word written so far...Hermione\'s gentle and self directed sarcasm is endearing...currently, stories with a real smart arse Hermione are my favs...So following this logic...I eagerly await the next posting...

Shemxxx
person Rilla
schedule October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Why do I get the feeling this is going to tear my heart out? Seriously, well done and I\'m waiting anxiously for more.
person Gwennavierre
schedule October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story is brilliant! I think McGonagall was atle tle harsh with Hermione, though, but that\'s alright. She can\'t be pampered for being smart all the time. :)
I hope you update again soon, but don\'t procrastinate too much on your essays! ;-D
person animegrl
schedule October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ah yes detention, and a make up class with Snape. You are a good writer keep up the good work, but please try to put in some `br in the writing cause its kinda a strain on my eyes when it is all crmped up like that. Other wise keep up the excellent work, :-)
person Virgy
schedule October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Amazing! I simply love the way you write! but you know this too well ;)
And I want another chapter of stress relief..pleeeeeaseeeee

kisses
Virgy
person Andrian
schedule October 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! thanks for answering my response and I cannot wait though you are very very wicked using my other favorite guy (grins) now who will I pull for? Sitting on pins and needles biting nails.
person jj
schedule October 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nice job. Your Snape is pretty well in-character. *throws confetti happily* Can\'t wait until Remus appears in the story. :)
person shemhamforash
schedule October 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Love it...Never had the need for chocolate cake though...reading about Sev, in such a mannar I just did has always taken care of the need to subsitute chocolate for...well I am sure you get the idea....Love it

Want. more. now.

Shemxxx
person Lizzie
schedule October 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Chocolate cake without the calories? I should start writing! Anyway, good story, update really really quick!