rate_review Reviews

Can we say that Sev is a bit more than PISSED!!! I really LOVE how you wrote his internal discussion, PERFECTLY WICKED Hooch has got to be eating this up;-) The plot thickens!!! I\'m still curious to see how Hermione handles this.... will she tell her husband, will she act like she wants nothing to do with Sev OR want him more than ever? Hoping for more soon..... PLEASE!!! Deb >^..^<

what a chapter that was! :D
now there\'s a way to get over the depresso-ness of the last chapter! hurrah!
i must say its a tangled web you\'re creating, but i suppose thats precise point of remus not being a bastard, tortures your poor fans no end!
***Seva***

:\'( That was so sad!
Very well-written though!

Yeah, it was bound to happen... *sigh. But I\'m very curious to see what happens when she comes back with a husband in tow!

Chapter 10 was/is HOT, HOT, HOT!!! I do like the Remus/Hermione pairing, but in it\'s own story;-) Is Hermione going to tell Remus about Severus? She sounds like she is happy with him.... what will make her want to go back to Sev?knowknow you can\'t answer now & give away the story so you know I will be back for more!!! Deb >^..^<

hmmmmm...Remus hey? Dunno my pet...Maybe alright for a side dish before the main course, but I am afraid I am a Sev woman, through and through...

I did receive both of your last emails and am currently considering my reply...which loosely translates to I was tickled pink to receive another of your offerings and as I have just returned home, am waiting till I have read enough fics to relax me before I dribble intoyour inbox...

Loved this chapter, despite there being no Sev, except his name..but fortunately the name is enough to get a nice reaction from me...

Love it. But you knew that already...

Much love and respect...

Shem xxx

Glad you got to the cold shoulder point. Because the sooner you gherehere, the sooner we can get to the two of them making good again, or at least trying to.

*sobs in theatrical manner* the break up..*sniff*...i knew it was coming..but still...
ok, must get a grip on self and write functional reveiw..
another gloriously written chapter, as always, self-loathing \'bastard\' severus is heartbreaking..*looks tearful* have overwhelming urge to mess up my ice queen exterior and adore him in \'cute\' (shudders at evil word) manner...good god m\'dear, your writing must be powerful!
***Seva***

bad bad bad.
i\'m so sad for mione now.

why can\'t severus just go with her? why why why?

Great story! It\'s a pity I didn\'t know before that you continue writing the story here... I started reading it at Whispers and there you only have 2 chapters up... Well at least I have the oportunity to read 6 new chapters all at once.
Maybe you can put a note there... maybe I\'m not the only one not knowing you updated here.

I love the story... and the challenge has very interesting rules... I\'m looking forward to the Remus part... but you can make the Severus part as long as you wish... I love them both ;)