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for Revenge of a Hermione Scorned.

by Daya

person Catherine
schedule October 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HAHA...this is the funnist story i have read in soooo long:P I was laughing all the time...\'the floor spinning, maybe if i hold onto it it will stop\'...HAHA...ur wonderful my love continue please

Catherine
schedule October 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Poor Hermione! Keep writing please?
person Anon
schedule October 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
of course they didnt
person GlindaTrisstt
schedule October 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oooooo hard to seduce someone while drunk !! Even harder when their drunk. Been there done that, or tried and failed miserabley.
Interesting story so far, look forward to more.

Glinda
person Jessicat1982
schedule October 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hehe. once again you had me cracking up. you know what would be great? a chapter from snape\'s POV. I\'d love to find out what he thought about hermione\'s new appearance. I can\'t wait for you to update again.
schedule October 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hehe Poor Hermione! This is *such* a funny chapter! \"ride the #9 to Happyville\'......Precious! Love it! Love it! LOVE IT! LOL Must have more! Please write more?
person Lady Aidil
schedule October 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LOL I was loudly laughing while I wasdingding your fic-you are incredibly talented in writing of funny situations,inebriated and still very interesting thinking Hermiona is one of the best her portrayal I`ve ever met in fics!I love your work,it`s both funny and arousing as Hell,I want more and more of this story,please,update as soon as possible,this is sheer pleasure reading something so enjoyable,exiting and well-written as that fic-don`t abandon it,it`s lovely,with dead sexy Severus,of course!(I`m totally obsessed with him,envying Hermiona`s possibility to be with my beloved male from Dreamworld)
person Stu
schedule October 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
As ever you\'ve managed to impress me.......Now I can add HP fic to your list of talents...Ashleigh Kain would be as proud of you as I am! ;)
person Red Writing Hood
schedule October 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh...A drunk Hermione is NOT a pleasant thing to witness. LOL...Poor thing, for Snape...Am TOTALLY loving this fic.

Red
person nesscafe
schedule October 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t begin to tell you how very much I am enjoying this story! It is highly amusing and seriously funny!!!! There are so many great parts, but I believe we all agree that if we were spending we would all share her intentions!

\"My intentions. Ooh. Actually Severus, I had planned to remove every item of your clothing, and spend an eternity licking and sucking my way across your body, as you writhe beneath me, unable to move as I have tied to you the posts of your four poster bed (mental note to self, find out if he has four poster bed before producing silk scarves out of mid air), torturing and teasing you with my wetness, before impaling myself on your long hard swollen cock and riding you like you were the number 9 bus to Happyville. For a week. \"

Best line I\'ve heard in quite some time! Wonder what he would have done if she had actually said that!!! LOL!