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October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE YOUR FIC!You write it so brilliantly and funny,Hermiona`s portrait is perfectly gorgoreus,I obviously like Snape`s POV ,it increases tension and my curiosity as well.I`m dying of impatience what it would be in next chapters,this story is hilarious,I want more and more,update quickly,please!
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October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
BWAHAHAHAHAHA!
Absolutely wonderful! Sooo funny, very reminisant of \"very secret diaries\". Ams rather fond of that writing style myself. Loved refereces to root vegatables.
Please more! Haven\'t enjoyed myself so throughly in very long time.
Absolutely wonderful! Sooo funny, very reminisant of \"very secret diaries\". Ams rather fond of that writing style myself. Loved refereces to root vegatables.
Please more! Haven\'t enjoyed myself so throughly in very long time.
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October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You did very well writing Snape! : ) Seemed quite true to character. ::smirks:: Loved the battle he underwent. lol
And the bit at the end that was priceless -- especially comparing the sudden \'revenge\' rivalry between them to his duelling with lochart (no, I don\'t know how to spell that name. lol).
Look forward to more.
Kiri
And the bit at the end that was priceless -- especially comparing the sudden \'revenge\' rivalry between them to his duelling with lochart (no, I don\'t know how to spell that name. lol).
Look forward to more.
Kiri
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October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
lol, i love your story! please keep writing!
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October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
And I thought reading Hermione\'s POV was amusing! Hooo Weee! What a story this is! So very fun and imaginative and well written to boot! I look forward to another chapter! And another... And another... And another... And another... And another... And another... ;c)
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October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You did very well with your depiction of Snape (no need to tremble, LOL) . . . I loved his sense of humor, it was perfect. When in doubt with regard to his personal thoughts, I imagine that sardonic self-deprecation would do rather nicely. Well done!
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October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*lol* oh lord, i did adore that snape pov a great deal. your entire story is absolutely hysterical (i love the inner monologue of hermione the entire way through) and this only added to the immense giggles. thank you for the wonderful laugh and i would not be against the smut coming soon. *no pun ndednded of course* i applaud your clever idea and wait breathlessly for more. :)
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October 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Love this so far...i like the way you
word Hermonies thoughts. Please update soon!!
word Hermonies thoughts. Please update soon!!
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October 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ok so is that now 3 of the greatest chapters of hilarity written in less than 24 hrs... or am I once again delusional???
I bow to your greatness...This Hermione is brilliant and truly original...have always that there was a smart arse underneath all that intelligence...innocent chit outwardly...Vamp to the core...
WANT. MORE. NOW...
Shemxxx
I bow to your greatness...This Hermione is brilliant and truly original...have always that there was a smart arse underneath all that intelligence...innocent chit outwardly...Vamp to the core...
WANT. MORE. NOW...
Shemxxx
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October 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
GAH! Cliffie! Bad Daya! lol Lovely story so far!