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for Arrangements Have Been Made

by teshara

person Raven
schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is a really origional storyline
and utterly great lol
keep wirting
.x.Ravn.x.
person Raven
schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is a really origional storyline
and utterly great lol
keep wirting
.x.Ravn.x.
person Estrilda
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like it.
person shemhamforash
schedule October 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nice start. just wanted to point out in like the second last line you said Sev, or Lucius, Ive forgotten now (fucked up short term memory---Too many drugs when I was younger) raised his want--Im pretty sure you meant wand.

Anyway, I am looking forward to where you take this, you seem to have set it up for a story line with a vunerable Lucius...very interesting (of course, I could have interpreted completely wrong in which case I shall smack myself in the forehead now to save time later *idiot idiot idiot*). Although I generally don\'t go much past SS/HG fic, I do like the occasional insight into Lucios\' psyche.

For this reason I am desperately crying... More soon!

Shemhamforashxxx