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December 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow... Deep, moving, and tear-jerking. You did a wonderful job on introducing the newest character. She seems like a sweet girl. Remus seems to like her too. I feel bad for Bill and Harry. You\'re doing a great job. Keep it coming, girlie!
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November 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Poor Bri. To have a part of her life erased from memory. That has to be tough. And I think Izzy needs to be throttled. Its typical that she would accuse Severus. Ugh...Kick her ass for me will ya?
Love the story so far, keep them coming.
Red
Love the story so far, keep them coming.
Red
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November 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well done. You have managed to write a very dark fic that looks as thought it may turn into a love story. I am glad to see that in your story the wizarding world is not all happy sing-songie after the fall of Voldemort, but is dark and unpredictable with a fair amount of evil in it still. That is much more realistic (for harry potter land). I cannot wait to read what you have comming up next.
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October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ugh...poor Bri. Im glad that Severus got her out of there. The poor thing. Things are going to be tough on her getting well aftert kit kind of abuse. Looking forward to more.
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October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is, as always, great. It\'s nice to know it was so easy for him to get her away. It\'s also nice to know that she\'s back at Hogwart\'s where she belongs. I thought that\'s what had been carved into her. It\'s nice to know I still have some of my skill. :P
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October 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow... that was... something, for sure. very good. poor, poor bri. that\'s just not quite right what has been done to her... what\'d they carve into her back? that\'s what i want to know. incredible darkness. very... deep and evil.
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October 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Eeep! What a dark, scary chapter. I loved it! Good idea having her not have any memories. I guess she obliverated them herself so she would not spill her secrets under torture. I love dark stories and this is just great. Look forward to more!
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October 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh...My...Goddess...
You DID say this was a dark chapter and you werent just whistling dixie...Holy crap...Poor Bri...I hope she gets rescued...PDQ!!!
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You DID say this was a dark chapter and you werent just whistling dixie...Holy crap...Poor Bri...I hope she gets rescued...PDQ!!!
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October 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is so good! I like the fact that Dumbledoor has got more then just the one \"twinkling\" emotion. You are writing him as he would be if this situation were real.(in Harry Potter land) I am on the edge of my swaitwaiting for more. I just love dark fic\'s! Update soon!
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October 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ugh...Man...I do NOT envy Bri and the things she must be going through. Severus seems cold here but then thats his way. I cant wait to read more.
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