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for The Shattering of Souls

by ladydeathfaerie

person Red Writing Hood
schedule July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just want to throttle Severus for what he\'s doing to poor Bri, making her fall in love with him while he cant stand her. Sigh, but knowing you you have some little plan in the works, a nice little twist? Like, say...this faerie person? Cant wait to see what you come up with now.

Fantastic chapter, looking forward to more!

Red
person amniarix
schedule July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok, ouch, you know things are dark when Severus Snape is the comic relief in a fic. (I\'m upchapchapter 5) This should be a wild ride, I\'ll hang in there and see how long my sensitive stomach can take it.
person Ana
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awsome fic! Love it!
I\'m not very good reviewing but I hope it\'s enough to satiate your thirst for reviews LOL
Keep up the good work. And I\'m expecting even more Snape smut!!!
person Kenly
schedule May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is coming along so well. poor albus. poor muggle girl. who was she? poor sevie. dude\'s gonna need an ice bath after that. what\'s goin on with remus and tyler? what\'s goin on with harry and izzy? haven\'t heard from them for a chapchapters. harry and izzy, i mean.
person Echo
schedule May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What a cliff hanger! You can feel the desperation of Dumbledore, the confusion of Bri. Very well written.
person Kenly
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
poor remie. he\'s so confused. seems he can\'t make heads or tails out of that guardian. and the snape/bri thing is grating on him with the harry/izzy thing. poor poor remie. poor bill too. i feel bad for him. he lost a brother, and the woman he blames for it is under the very same roof...
person Kenly
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this chapter worked well. they\'re both blitzed and both feeling bad. so... it works. the meaness that harry uses on her.. sor sorta think there shoulda been more of it, or TO it... but it works too. so, what about the other characters? Bill and Remus and Tyler... we keep reading about the day-to-days of Snape, Bri, Izzy and Harry. how about a day of one of thhershers too? just a thought. i love this. keep going!
person Red Writing Hood
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my Goddess. That was a powerful chapter. Just thin tha that Harry had that side of him hidden all those years. I enjoy a bit of roughness but...ouch...I do not envy Izzy when she wakes the next day. However...I do like the thought of Harry finally growing up and taking some control in a part of his life. Well done.

Red
person cherylzv
schedule December 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve had your story on my \"to read when I have time\" list for awhile now, and I am so happy that I finally had a chance to take a look at it! I\'ve only gotten through the first couple of chapters so far, but look forward to reading the rest. Great story line so far, and I like the darkness in it (and the rest that I can anticipate coming up). Intelligently written and the pace is good. Thanks for a cool story.

R.
person Kenly
schedule December 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
So... What\'s up with Remus? What about that guardian, Tyler? That\'s not cool of Severus, but I wouldn\'t expect anything else, I guess. ^.^ This is coming along smashingly, doll. If no one else is reading it, I am.