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for Of Darkness and Light

by Keshu

schedule October 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Keshu, honey, we need to work on you lengthening your chapters. This was very well done (as you well know) and when both of them went into the dive I swear my stomach droppeth tth them. Damn I envy your skill! Well done and I eagerly await the next chapter.

Dun dun duuuun!

Ren (have I mentioned I love my new nick?)
schedule October 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful Keshu just beautiful. I love gra graphic descriptions you use, and have I mentioned I\'m totally envious of you and your skill?

Awaiting the chance to get a peek at your next chapter. More soon!